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pleasewriteanessaywithin120wordsentitled"myfavoriteolypicmoment"byapplyingtheparagrap...
please write an essay within 120 words entitled "my favorite olypic moment"by applying the paragraph writing technique-—comparison and contrast. in your writing, please take the following questions into consideration：
1 who is my favorite olynpic athlete?
2 in which olynpic evebt has he or she stuck in my mind?
3 are great athetes born or made？
4 what makes a great athlete?
5 what are the qualities of a great athlete? 展开
1 who is my favorite olynpic athlete?
2 in which olynpic evebt has he or she stuck in my mind?
3 are great athetes born or made？
4 what makes a great athlete?
5 what are the qualities of a great athlete? 展开
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my favorite olypic moment
As a fan of Liu Xiang,I just can't stop loving him since his perfect show in the event 110m-hurdles in the 2004 Olmpics.I believe that most of you still remember the day he won the championship in the game!
It is really an exciting and inspiring game that every Chinese is proud of him.He made the history to be the first Asian to win the first prize in the game!However,we also should realize that without his hard training,he wouldn't make it. So,it is his hard working that made his success,though,he has a good talent.There are many good qualities that makes a great athlete.Patience,hard training,independence and so on.But in my opinion,confidence has been the biggest quaility that makes a excellent athlete.I have the faith in Liu Xiang that in every game he takes,he has the strong belief to win it!That is why he has made so many wonders for us.
I always watch the game he played in the 2004 Olympic Games,which gives me much energy to follow his steps to make my wonders in my own life!
有不懂的可以再问，算是互相交流吧~~希望答案有用！
As a fan of Liu Xiang,I just can't stop loving him since his perfect show in the event 110m-hurdles in the 2004 Olmpics.I believe that most of you still remember the day he won the championship in the game!
It is really an exciting and inspiring game that every Chinese is proud of him.He made the history to be the first Asian to win the first prize in the game!However,we also should realize that without his hard training,he wouldn't make it. So,it is his hard working that made his success,though,he has a good talent.There are many good qualities that makes a great athlete.Patience,hard training,independence and so on.But in my opinion,confidence has been the biggest quaility that makes a excellent athlete.I have the faith in Liu Xiang that in every game he takes,he has the strong belief to win it!That is why he has made so many wonders for us.
I always watch the game he played in the 2004 Olympic Games,which gives me much energy to follow his steps to make my wonders in my own life!
有不懂的可以再问，算是互相交流吧~~希望答案有用！
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