Question

请大家帮我写篇英语作文，写得好的给10分

假如你是王丹，你上周和父母第一次去西湖度假了。请你根据表格中的信息，向你在美国的笔友安迪(Andy)介绍一下你的度假经历。
要求：1.用上现在完成时；
2.70-80词。
Time Last week
Place West Lake
Activities Go sightseeing,take a ride on the boat and climb the mountain
Comments Beautiful,clean and quiet
Dear Andy,
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Yours,
WangDan

Answer 1

Dear Andy:

How are you? Last week, I went to the famous West Lake with my parents. And I think it is a really worthy experience. The lake is very still, clean and beautiful, just like a shiny mirror on a sunny day. We went around, discovering the wonders here and there. In the afternoon, we went boating riding and mountain climbing - they were both very refreshing. It was so quiet by the side of the lake as well, as if the whole world except us does not exist! I could live there forever, it is truly a wonder of nature. I hope that you can come and see it sometime, too.

Yours,
WangDan

Answer 2

楼主我插一句哦 这竖亮个作文应该用不到余滚宽现在完成时吧？应该是一备李般过去式吧？
Dear Andy,
I miss you very much.I went to the West Lake with my parents last week.It is very interesting.We went sighting,took a ride in the boat and climbde the mountain.The lake is very beautiful,clean and quiet.I Iike there very much.I blieve that if you visit there,you will like there,too.
Write soon.
Yours,
WangDan