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英语作文修改，谢谢

英语作文修改，谢谢1.him还是them
2.逗号还是句号
3.是否有其他错误，帮忙修改下可以吗
谢谢！

Answer 1

The ability to deal with problems As the saying goes:” happiness is not the absence ofproblems, but the ability to deal with them.” Nobosy’s life can always gosmoothly. For instance, there were many problems and failure in Edison’s life. Whenhe was eager for the invention of electric bomb, more than 1000 materialschosen to make the bomb were taken into consideration, all of which had beenproved useless regrettably. Nevertheless, Edison kept searching for the most suitable material until the electric bomb lightened! As Stephen Hawking once said:” It’s not aproblem, It’s a challenge, enjoy facing it.” We are supposed to develop ourability to deal with problems and be happy. For one thing, we should manage thingspositively. Attitude determines everything. For another one, never give up! Onlywe are optimistic and persist in dealing with things can the problems be solvedand we be happy finally. 这篇文章没做大改动, 只是稍微改了一下.有的地方有语法错误,只是按照你的原意修改.