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改错May 31st,Sunday Fine

Today is my grandma’s birthday.I woke up early than uaual this morning,as we were going to her house for the lunch.She lives

with my uncle in the countryside.

Before we went to there we decided to buy a birthday cake and some gifts.It took us about an hour get there by bus.Grandma

was very pleasedly at our arrival.Then we sat down and talked a lot with Grandma while my uncle was doing the cooking.She

is really a good cook.However,we all like the food he prepared.We chatted for the rest of the days.It was already very later

when we got back home.It was a nice visit.

●Dear Mr.Brown,

I’m now back home safe.Thank you very much with all the help I got from you during my stay.Hope everything is fine with

you.

Now I wonder that I could ask you do me a favor.When I came back,all of a suddenly,I realized that I have had left my English

dictionaries behind at your place.It is a precious gift from my American teacher.Would you please be such kind as to send them

back to me?I’ll pay the postage.The dictionary,its cover is red,must be on bookshelf in my bedroom.

With best wishes

Answer 1

一、综合修改（2个错标点，2个错别字，4个病句。）
太阳下山后，傍晚时分。我和姐姐来到一坐大山脚下。我们开始向上攀登。爬着爬着，我们看见周围开着一朵朵白花，真是五颜六色。攀到山腰，红花渐渐多起来了，它们红得那么鲜艳，灿烂、漂亮，艳丽极了。你看，这一簇还是争奇斗艳，那一簇已是真相盛开了。
2、秋天的早晨，当你来到我们学校的时候，就会看到美丽的鲜花和诱人的香味。有桂花，月季花，菊花和桃花等，它开得最美。操场上空，五星红旗迎风飘荡；教室里，窗明儿静，同学们大声地阅读着课文。我们的校园真美丽、漂亮啊！走进学生阅览室，宽阔的空间，淡雅的色彩，浓浓的书香，一下了进入了我的眼帘。你看，书架上陈立着崭新的一排排图书，桌子上还摆放着《儿童文学》《少年文艺》《西游记》和《中国少年报》等杂志。许多读者以经坐在里面津津有味的看书了
3、上课铃响了。我们全体每个同学都赶快走近教室，立刻安静下来。李老师已经笑容满面的微笑着走近了教室的门。她不但有病，可课还是上的那样代劲……她在黑板上写字，可还是那样工整。每个同学都十分钻研地听她讲。
4、一阵微风吹来，碧绿的池水泛起阵阵波涛，使人心旷神怡。池边的花坛里胜开着牡丹、月季、芍药，它们虽然开得那么热烈，但一朵比一朵美丽，还不时散发出诱人的香味扑鼻而来。这水池，这花坛，还有远处的假山、凉亭、树木，一幅美丽图画
5、有一次，作完语文作业，我把本子一推。就要出去玩。爸爸问我“作业捡察过了吗”？我漫无边际地回答“不用捡察，保证没措”！爸爸庄严对我说，“不
要那么自信。细心一点好，学习可不能有一点马虎！”

1、傍晚时分，我和姐姐来到一（座）大山脚下。我们开始向上攀登。爬着爬着，我们看见周围开着一朵朵白花。攀到山腰，红花渐渐多起来了，它们那么鲜艳，灿烂，漂亮。你看，这一簇还是含苞待放，那一簇已是9争）相盛开了。
2、秋天的早晨，当你来到我们学校的时候，就会看到美丽的鲜花，闻到诱人的香味。有桂花、月季花、菊花和桃花等，它们开得都很美。操场上空，五星红旗迎风飘荡；教室里，窗明（几）(净)，同学们大声地阅读着课文。我们的校园真漂亮啊！走进学生阅览室，宽阔的空间，淡雅的色彩，一下了进入了我的眼帘。你看，书架上陈立着崭新的一排排图书，桌子上还摆放着《儿童文学》《少年文艺》《西游记》和《中国少年报》等杂志。许多读者(已）经坐在里面津津有味的看书了
3、上课铃响了，我们全体同学都赶快走（进）教室，立刻安静下来。李老师已经笑容满面的微笑着走（进）了教室的门。她虽然有病，可课还是上的那样（带）劲，在黑板上写字还是那样工整。每个同学都十分认真地听她讲。
4、一阵微风吹来，碧绿的池水泛起阵阵涟漪，使人心旷神怡。池边的花坛里（盛）开着牡丹、月季、芍药，它们不但开得那么热烈，一朵比一朵美丽，还不时散发出诱人的香味。这水池，这花坛，还有远处的假山、凉亭、树木，构成了一幅美丽图画。
5、有一次，（做）完语文作业，我把本子一推，就要出去玩。爸爸问我作业（检）察过了吗？我漫不经心地回答不用（检）察，保证没（错）！爸爸严肃的对我说：“不要那么自信。细心一点好，学习可不能有一点马虎！”

Answer 2

It took us about an hour get there by bus.应该改为It took us about an hour to get there by bus（语法：it takes sb some time to do sth)。She is really a good cook.这里的she 应该是he吧！It was already very later(later应改为late，用一般形式就好，later是比较级，这里用形容词，不用比较级）