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急~~！几个英语句子帮改错！！ 帮改就给分！不要在线翻译的！

演讲稿上的几个英语句子：上面是我写的英文，下面是我要表达的意思。
把汉语的意思翻译成英语就可以了。麻烦帮改一下，或者翻译一下。谢谢！！谢谢！！
1)The current stage of IT In China
IT 在我国的发展现状。

2)The first stage is the HIS improved step by step
第一阶段是 HIS 的逐步完善。

3)The second stage is the hospital clinical application system
第二阶段是 医院临床应用系统。

4）The third stage is the public health information sharing
第三阶段是 公共卫生信息共享。

5）The hospital information system has been recognized as a new science in the medical informatics by international academic circles .
医院信息系统在国际学术界已公认为新兴的医学信息学(Medical Informatics)的重要分支。

6）Doctor and patient in the different region can communicate use the network.…… in this way we can save lots of money and time.（我只会翻这么多，下面的不会了……）
远程医疗主要通过网络将异地专家和患者之间动态连接起来，使双方好像面对面一样，由专家为患者看病，一起讨论病情。这样大大方便了患者，使患者能得到及时的确诊与治疗，降低了诊断费用，同时也提高了医院的服务水平。

7）With the development of IT ,the medical service will become digitization ，intelligentize，Humanistic service.
随着IT的发展，医疗服务也会向数字化，智能化，人性化转变。

Answer 1

首先说明我的英语只刚过六级，也是一般般的，花了25分钟帮你看了一看，在你原先翻译的基础上适当的做了些修改，改的怎样你看了再说，应该没有大的词汇和语法错误，有意见再补充吧

1)The IT current develepment condition of China
IT 在我国的发展现状。

2)The first step is improve the HIS step by step
第一阶段是 HIS 的逐步完善。

3)The second step is the hospital clinical application systems
第二阶段是 医院临床应用系统。

4）The third step is the information of public health sharing
第三阶段是 公共卫生信息共享。

5）The hospital information systems has been recognized as a new science in the medical informatics by international academic circles .
医院信息系统在国际学术界已公认为新兴的医学信息学(Medical Informatics)的重要分支。

6）Telemedicine primarily through the internet and link up the doctor and the patient,just like face-to-face,the doctor exams the patients , and discuss the disease toghter. This way has greatly facilitated the patients, so that patients can receive timely diagnosis and treatment , not only reducing the cost of diagnosis, but also upgrade the level of hospital services .
远程医疗主要通过网络将异地专家和患者之间动态连接起来，使双方好像面对面一样，由专家为患者看病，一起讨论病情。这样大大方便了患者，使患者能得到及时的确诊与治疗，降低了诊断费用，同时也提高了医院的服务水平。

7）With the development of IT ,the medical service will become digitization ，intelligentize and Humanistic .
随着IT的发展，医疗服务也会向数字化，智能化，人性化转变。

Answer 2

1)The current develepment condition of IT in China
2)The first step is to improve the HIS step by step
3)The second step is the hospital clinical application system
4）The third step is the sharing of information in public health
5）The hospital information system has been recognized as a new branch of medical informatics by international academic group.
6）Telemedicine is mainly through internet, this could construct a linkage between doctors and patients face-to-face. Doctor exams the patient, and discuss the disease together. This would greatly facilitated the patients, so that patients can receive timely diagnosis and treatment , not only reducing the cost of diagnosis, but also upgrade the level of hospital services.
7）With the development of IT ,the medical service will become digitized ，intelligentized and humanized.