Question

急求初二英语作文！

假设你是李东,你的父亲在外地工作，你知道他的生活方式很不健康。请为他提建议。（60词左右）
提示
1.watch TV until midnight
2.go to work without breakfast
3.hardly do exercise
4.smoke

Answer 1

Dear dad,

Long time no see. Hope you have a good time working outside home.

I am writing this letter because I am very concerned about your life style. You always like watching TV until midnight which is bad to your health because your body and organs need rest that time, just like a machine that need turning down for maintainance.

Also, you often go to work without breakfast because you watch TV too late to get up early. In the morning our body do need taking into food to satisfy its energy needs.

Beside these, you hardly do exercise and smoke too much, which will further affect your health. You are the backbone of our family and all we want you to be happy and healthy.
Hope to see you in the weekends.

追问

能少一点麽？只必须写到提示内容，而且是用“would you mind”提建议~60词就够了~O(∩_∩)O谢谢

追答

Dear dad,

Long time no see. Hope you have a good time working outside home.

I am writing this letter because I am very concerned about your life style. You always like watching TV until midnight and go to work without breakfast. Also you hardly do exercise and smoke too much, which are bad to your health.

You are the backbone of our family and all we want you to be happy and healthy.

差不多74个字。