英语短文改错,10处

i就不大写了,十处,Wheniwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.ihopedicouldalsohaveit.Oneda... i就不大写了,十处,When i was in high school,most of my friend had bicycles.i hoped i could also have it.One day i saw the second-hand bicycle,that was only one hundred yuan.i asked my father the money.But he said he could only give me half of money.He should find the other half myself.So i went to sell newspapers after school.My father was pleased if i showed him the money a month after.He gives me the other fifty.You can imagine how much happy i was when i rode to school on my own bicycle. 展开
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1.friend改为复数。2.ask要加for搭配3.money前要加the4.he改成i5.the other half中的half 去掉6.was pleased 改为would be pleased7.a month later8.give改为gave9.how much将much去掉10.将rode改为went
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my friends
a second-hand
which was only
asked my father for the money
give me half of the money
I should find
when I showed
a month later
He gave me
how happy
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i (hoped->wished)
have (it->one).
i saw (the->a)
that (was->cost)
father(for) the money.
half of (the)money
(He-> I) should
(if->when) i showed
month (after->later)
how (much->删) happy
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my friend---my friends,
have it---have one
the second----a second
the money---for money
of money----of the money
he should--I should
newpapers---newspaper
after---later
gives--gave
省略much
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1. friend > friends
2, it > one
3. that > which
4. ask my father for the money
5. half of money > half of the money
6. He > I
7. if > when
8. after > later
9. gives > gave
10. how much > how
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