Question

英语作文

在中华人民共和国成立六十周年之际，康康的加拿大朋友Michael想了解康康家乡的变化。假如你是康康,请根据以下提示给Michael 回一封电子邮件。
过去
生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系简单、慢。
现在
生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多，住的舒适,手机普及。
要求：1、围绕以上内容进行合理表述；
2、所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；
3、词数80词左右,开头语已给出 (不计入词数)。
提示词汇： living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications (通讯), telegram, thanks to, rapidly, comfortable, mobile phone, policy
作文：
Dear Michael,
You want to learn the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
In the past，——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

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Answer 1

Dear Michael,
You want to learn the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
In the past,life condition is poor, the road narrow, less traffic, ill-housed, do not have enough to eat, contact is simple, slowly.
now
Life condition is superior, the road wide, vehicles, more comfortable living, mobile phone popularity.

追问

可以自己写一下吗，不要用翻译机，可以吗

追答

用翻译机比较快吗

你可以请教关于英语的高手
团队

追问

您可以帮我一下吗，求求您了啊！！！好的一定加分！！！

追答

sorry 不是我不帮你 是我英语作文实在不好啊
没帮到你的忙
你可以向 译苦思甜 团队求助

追问

Thanks all the same!

Answer 2

Dear Michael,
You want to learn the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
in the past, the living standard is quite poor , no wide road,no cars in the street, we can't even live in a cozy house or eat enough food . the communication is also simple and too slow to transfer our information .
but now ,great changes have taken place in our city . we can easily enjoy happy life , we can see the roads becaming wide . we live in a comfortable environment . what's more, you can see everyone taking a cellphone with themselves.
Things above is the evident changes in our hometown. i hope it will help you learn about my lively hometown.
这可是我辛辛苦苦自己想出来滴哦~希望可以被采纳哈~更希望可以帮到你~~~