我是一个快高考的学生,看到你发表的2011英语热门作文。 英语作文一直很薄弱,希望能走捷径,求些材料。
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2010年高考已告一段落,打开新浪网一看,吓我一跳,因为今年的高考英语作文跟我给学生选编的2010陕西英语作文热门话题及范文(第2版)第三篇几乎一模一样。学生只用套写我给他们教的模板便可轻松夺取作文高分。这已是继去年押中之后再次高中,因为我总结了近几年陕西高考命题规律及高考大纲作文要求后的得出的合理推断。
不过,还是要感谢上帝。不得庆贺一下!Thanks! My God!
给学生押的作文冲刺题:
1.假如你是李华,收到美国笔友艾米(Amy)的电子邮件,她说今年暑期到中国来学习汉语,在北京和西安两个城市间难以抉择,写信征求你的意见。请你给Amy回信,建议她来西安学习并说明理由。
内容提要:1.西安历史悠久,文化古城;2.学费便宜,房租生活费低;3.高校林立,学习资源丰富,而且有你给她当她免费汉语家教。
Dear Lihua,
I am going to China to learn Chinese in the coming summer vacation. I have gotten some information about Beijing and Xi’an on the Internet. I love both of them. It is hard to choose. Could you tell me which one is better for me?
Yours
Amy
参考译文(略)
2.假如你是李华,你所在的学校和美国Green School有交换学习项目,来你们班的美国交换生艾米(Amy)回美国6个月了,在中国学习期间她和你结对一帮一,她帮你学习英语,你帮她学习汉语,现在请根据如下提示给她写一封不少于100字电子邮件。
内容提要:1.感谢她帮助你学习英语;2. 告诉她你最近的英语学习生活;3.问候她的情况怎么样,希望她再来中国。
参考范文:
Dear Amy:
I am Li Hua, the one who learned so much English from you. How time flies!It is almost six months since you returned to America.I am really missing you and grateful to you for your guidance and advice on English learning. With your help, I have made much progress.
Nowadays, I am busy studying for the College Entrance Examination. I need to finish one English paper every two days. I have aready reviewed all the key words and grammars. The reading ways you taught me prove to be so effective that I can finish four pieces of reading comprehensions in half an hour.In the latest test, I got a surprising score——135, making me one of the toppest three students in my class.
How are you going these days? Are you going on with your Chinese pusuit? You are always welcome if you need my help. By the way, My classmates want to make more American friends. Hope to come to China again in the nearest future.
Best Wishes
Li Hua
下面介绍我的推断方法:
1. 高考英语作文以考生熟悉的话题为主;
2. 高考英语作文要让考生有话可说题;
3. 高考英语作文不出偏题,怪题;
4. 高考英语作文要让英语水平中上等的高中生能完成写作要求,
5. 本人所在的教研室有铁杆哥们直接参加高考命题。
下面请看06-09年陕西高考作文话题分布:
06年:表格提示A、B辨述决择型:假期外出旅游还是呆在家中,说明有缺点,并选择。(生活安排类)
07年:书信提示辨析建议题型:假期Lora想找一份兼职工作锻炼,妈妈反对。要求考生说明工作的好处及妈妈反对的原因,并提出自己的建议。(生活安排类)
08年:单一话题谈论型:根据提示写发言稿, 要求考生对“周五举行读报活动”谈自己看法, 陈述理由(可举例说明),给出具体建议。(学习活动类)
09年:说理建议型:给名叫Grown-up的网友回帖,帮助他解决成长中的烦恼:都快上大学了,妈妈还把他当小孩看待。要求考生劝慰、开导Grown-up,帮他分析问题,同时提出解决问题的办法。(人际关系类)
告诉大家一个秘密,这些话题都是我们给大学生考口语时的常见话题,有些是英语角活动的类似话题。今年是陕西省新课改第一年,试题难度起伏不会很大,我大胆断定今年的高考英语作文依然以考生熟悉的话题和题材为主。基于此,我给考生精选了10道高考作文题,其中便包括以上那篇押中的题。至于还有相关押题的其他测试原理和内部资源,我就不说了。
以后陕西高考英语作文可能涉及到的热门话题:学生健康类;学习方法类;绿色环保校园类;校园现象辨析类。届时我将为考生提供样题及模板作文。
下面提供一篇范文:
1.
假如你叫李华,参加学校开展的"有困难向谁求助"(Whom do you turn to when in trouble )的调查活动,调查结果如下表.请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容.
求助对象
比例
理由
同学,朋友
58%
年龄相仿,容易理解与交流
老师,家长
30%
有爱心,有经验,可以信任
无
12%
不愿与人交流,难以与人沟通
注意:1.内容要点全面,并表达出你的观点.为了使文章连贯,可适当增加内容.
2.词数:100词左右.
Dear editor,
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
I'm a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey — "Who do you turn to when in trouble " Here are the results.
58% of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble .They're almost of the same age, so they can talk with and understand each other easily. While 30% of the students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can' t get on well with others. They have few friends.
In my opinion, when in trouble we'd better ask our teachers, parent, friends or classmates for help.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.以下是某英文报联合你校对你市(Kangming City)1998年到2008年家庭消费变化的图表,请据此写一篇短文,作一文字说明.文章的开头已经给出.词数110左右.
图表1 图表2
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008.
图标省略
【参考范文】
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly.
The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008.
Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
不过,还是要感谢上帝。不得庆贺一下!Thanks! My God!
给学生押的作文冲刺题:
1.假如你是李华,收到美国笔友艾米(Amy)的电子邮件,她说今年暑期到中国来学习汉语,在北京和西安两个城市间难以抉择,写信征求你的意见。请你给Amy回信,建议她来西安学习并说明理由。
内容提要:1.西安历史悠久,文化古城;2.学费便宜,房租生活费低;3.高校林立,学习资源丰富,而且有你给她当她免费汉语家教。
Dear Lihua,
I am going to China to learn Chinese in the coming summer vacation. I have gotten some information about Beijing and Xi’an on the Internet. I love both of them. It is hard to choose. Could you tell me which one is better for me?
Yours
Amy
参考译文(略)
2.假如你是李华,你所在的学校和美国Green School有交换学习项目,来你们班的美国交换生艾米(Amy)回美国6个月了,在中国学习期间她和你结对一帮一,她帮你学习英语,你帮她学习汉语,现在请根据如下提示给她写一封不少于100字电子邮件。
内容提要:1.感谢她帮助你学习英语;2. 告诉她你最近的英语学习生活;3.问候她的情况怎么样,希望她再来中国。
参考范文:
Dear Amy:
I am Li Hua, the one who learned so much English from you. How time flies!It is almost six months since you returned to America.I am really missing you and grateful to you for your guidance and advice on English learning. With your help, I have made much progress.
Nowadays, I am busy studying for the College Entrance Examination. I need to finish one English paper every two days. I have aready reviewed all the key words and grammars. The reading ways you taught me prove to be so effective that I can finish four pieces of reading comprehensions in half an hour.In the latest test, I got a surprising score——135, making me one of the toppest three students in my class.
How are you going these days? Are you going on with your Chinese pusuit? You are always welcome if you need my help. By the way, My classmates want to make more American friends. Hope to come to China again in the nearest future.
Best Wishes
Li Hua
下面介绍我的推断方法:
1. 高考英语作文以考生熟悉的话题为主;
2. 高考英语作文要让考生有话可说题;
3. 高考英语作文不出偏题,怪题;
4. 高考英语作文要让英语水平中上等的高中生能完成写作要求,
5. 本人所在的教研室有铁杆哥们直接参加高考命题。
下面请看06-09年陕西高考作文话题分布:
06年:表格提示A、B辨述决择型:假期外出旅游还是呆在家中,说明有缺点,并选择。(生活安排类)
07年:书信提示辨析建议题型:假期Lora想找一份兼职工作锻炼,妈妈反对。要求考生说明工作的好处及妈妈反对的原因,并提出自己的建议。(生活安排类)
08年:单一话题谈论型:根据提示写发言稿, 要求考生对“周五举行读报活动”谈自己看法, 陈述理由(可举例说明),给出具体建议。(学习活动类)
09年:说理建议型:给名叫Grown-up的网友回帖,帮助他解决成长中的烦恼:都快上大学了,妈妈还把他当小孩看待。要求考生劝慰、开导Grown-up,帮他分析问题,同时提出解决问题的办法。(人际关系类)
告诉大家一个秘密,这些话题都是我们给大学生考口语时的常见话题,有些是英语角活动的类似话题。今年是陕西省新课改第一年,试题难度起伏不会很大,我大胆断定今年的高考英语作文依然以考生熟悉的话题和题材为主。基于此,我给考生精选了10道高考作文题,其中便包括以上那篇押中的题。至于还有相关押题的其他测试原理和内部资源,我就不说了。
以后陕西高考英语作文可能涉及到的热门话题:学生健康类;学习方法类;绿色环保校园类;校园现象辨析类。届时我将为考生提供样题及模板作文。
下面提供一篇范文:
1.
假如你叫李华,参加学校开展的"有困难向谁求助"(Whom do you turn to when in trouble )的调查活动,调查结果如下表.请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容.
求助对象
比例
理由
同学,朋友
58%
年龄相仿,容易理解与交流
老师,家长
30%
有爱心,有经验,可以信任
无
12%
不愿与人交流,难以与人沟通
注意:1.内容要点全面,并表达出你的观点.为了使文章连贯,可适当增加内容.
2.词数:100词左右.
Dear editor,
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
I'm a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey — "Who do you turn to when in trouble " Here are the results.
58% of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble .They're almost of the same age, so they can talk with and understand each other easily. While 30% of the students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can' t get on well with others. They have few friends.
In my opinion, when in trouble we'd better ask our teachers, parent, friends or classmates for help.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.以下是某英文报联合你校对你市(Kangming City)1998年到2008年家庭消费变化的图表,请据此写一篇短文,作一文字说明.文章的开头已经给出.词数110左右.
图表1 图表2
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008.
图标省略
【参考范文】
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly.
The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008.
Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
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