求英语高手帮忙缩写一篇英语文章。急!!! 高分。

原文:Mrs.AnneSterlingdidnotthinkoftheriskshewastakingwhensheranthroughaforestaftertwome... 原文:Mrs. Anne Sterling did not think of the risk she was taking when she ran through a forest after two men. They had rushed up to her while she was having a picnic at the edge of a forest with her children and tried to steal her handbag. In the struggle, the strap broke and, with the bag in their possession, both men started running through the trees. Mrs. Sterling got so angry that she ran after them. She was soon out of breath, but she continued to run. When she caught up with them, she saw that they had sat down and were going through the contents of the bag, so she ran straight at them. The men got such a fright that they dropped the bag and ran away. 'The strap needs mending,' said Mrs. Sterling later, 'but they did not steal anything.'
就短文的主要内容,缩写成一篇不超过70个词的短文,可以用一些比较高级的单词替换本本身的单词,最好用连词,副词等 使文章贯通。
我自己也会写,只是要拿去比赛,想看看有没有高手写的更好的啦~
谢啦~~~
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Mrs. Anne Sterling ran through a forest after two men who tried to steal her handbag while she was near the forest. In the struggle, the strap broke, and both men darted into the woods with her bag. Mrs. Sterling was enraged and ran after them. They were going over her stuff but at the sight of her they cowardly dropped the bag and dashed off. She suffered no losses but the broken strap.
...好不容易差不多了...压缩50%连内容都无法保证,再要求词汇神马的...
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Mrs. Anne Sterling was having a picnic with her children at the edge of a forest as two thieves snatched her handbag. She only managed to tear off the strap as she tried to retain it. Infuriated, she chased them into the forest, overlooking the danger involved. Breathlessly, she caught up with them as they stopped and they ran away, frightened and empty handed.

当然,内容不丢…… 70词 以内。
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Mrs. Anne Sterling did not consider the risk she was taking when she chased after two men through a forest. They tried to snatch her handbag while she was having a picnic with her children. Eventually the strap broke and both men ran off to the woods along with the bag. Mrs.Sterling was so furious that she pursued them until she was breathless. Approaching them, she saw that they were going through the bag's contents so she dashed towards them. They was so alarmed that they dropped the bag and fled.
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Mrs. Anne Sterling did not think of the risk she was taking when she ran through a forest after two men. They had rushed up to her while she was having a picnic at the edge of a forest with her children and tried to steal her handbag. In the struggle, the strap broke and, with the bag in their possession, both men started running through the trees. Mrs. Sterling got so angry that she ran after them. She was soon out of breath, but she continued to run. When she caught up with them, she saw that they had sat down and were going through the contents of the bag, so she ran straight at them. The men got such a fright that they dropped the bag and ran away. 'The strap needs mending,' said Mrs. Sterling later, 'but they did not steal anything.'
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