Question

这句话语法有错吗？请英语翻译高手看看

hello everybody,my name is Yuhu Zhang and i live in Fukushima right now. this is my first time standing here for "Victory Speech" . some of my friends always told me what the truth is. what is the best way to solve my trouble when i be in a spot.and somehow,i believe there is no truth on this planet .i still believe a very famous motto is “law of the negation of negation”will tell us about what things we are really worth looking into. in the point of fact that "truth" will give rise to misunderstanding

这句话帮我修改下，谢谢。请指出我的错误之处。还有我的中式思维还严重不？

Answer 1

Hello everyone,（最好这样称呼）My name is Yu HuZhang and I live in Fukushima presently.(目前) This is my first time standing here for "Victory Speech" . Some of my friends always told me what the truth is，what is the best way to solve my troubles when I am at the sea.(迷茫)And to a certain degree,(在一定程度上),I think there is no truth in this university .（宇宙，世界）I also like a very famous motto which says“law of the negation of negation”,it tells us about what things we are really worth looking into. In the terms of (在。。方面)reality（现实） ，the "truth" will cause misunderstandings..
你参考下。。不行再说。。。

Answer 2

1.该大写的地方请大写，注意下吧。
2.“right now”不很恰当，因为居住在某地是一段时间内的动作，而“right now”是某个时刻。建议改为“now”.
3."This is my first time"这句建议改为“It is the first time for me to stand here to make a ‘Victory Speech’”.
4.“Some of my friends always told me”时态不对，改为“Some of my friends have always being telling me”

追问

一般过去时哪错了? some of my friends always told me
right now .不发表言论。
"This is my first time",我觉的很简便啊？干嘛弄得那么复杂？

呵呵 我还想弄的更清楚。谢谢你

追答

才疏学浅，无以为继。

Answer 3

hello everybody. my name is Yuhu Zhang, and i live in Fukushima for the time being. this is my first time standing here for a "Victory Speech" . some of my friends always tell me what the truth is, what the best way is to solve my trouble when i am arriving a new place. and somehow, i believe there is no truth on this very planet. i still believe in “the law of the negation of negation”. this famous motto tells us what things we are really worth looking into. as a matter of fact, "the truth" we are told always give rise to misunderstanding.
如果你生长在国内，中式思维是根深蒂固的。

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谢谢你。
你在哪里长大的？btw

追答

国内，and still.
我不是英语专业的，但我相信你能鉴别。

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呵呵。

追答

Fukushima！保重啊！

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谢谢关心，我很好。

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Answer 4

1、名字正常中文顺序即可
2、right now是立刻的意思，用now就好
3、told改成tell，用现在是比较合适
4、改成which is the best way to
5、.i still believe in a very famous motto，that is “law of the negation of negation”will tell us about what things we are really worth looking into.

Answer 5

hello everybody,my name is Yuhu Zhang and i live in Fukushima right now. this is my first time standing here for "Victory Speech" . some of my friends always tell me what the truth is. what is the best way to solve my trouble when i am in a spot, however,i believe there is no truth on this planet because i still believe a very famous motto “law of the negation of negation”, which will tell us about what things we are really worth looking into. In fact, "truth" may give rise to misunderstanding as far as I can say.