Question

中文翻英文 英文高手请进 不要翻译软体

求高手帮我把中文的部分 翻英文 很急 拜托 拜托 语法要通顺

to a sad daughter'' 这首诗比Simple Arithmetic更有冲击力 因为我认为to a sad daughter'' 作者
写的文章比较精致和细腻 ,感情部分描述得很丰富 ,当你读过这首诗之後会发现诗里面的父亲很爱他的女儿，愿意让她去四处探索，但是希望她做自己，并离他很近 不要离她太远 . 这部分跟我生活中的某些部分 很相似 在我的生活中 我的母亲也非常爱我 她不想要我因为一些事情而改变我自己 例如化妆或是做一些不适合自己的的事情 同样的她也不想要我离她太远 ,我们母女间的感情很好 所以我们之间的距离是近的 这和诗里面的父亲一样 同样的道理
另一篇文章我觉得比较枯乏单调了点 ,比较没有冲击力 ,因为这位作者叙述感情的部分没有很丰富 ,文章里面的女孩 写信给她的父母 但母亲没有回信 只有父亲跟她用写信的方式 传达讯息而已 叙述感情部分需要再加强.总而言之, 就冲击力来讲 我会选择to a sad daughter'' 这首诗

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To a sad daughter 'this poem has more impact than the Simple man because I think to a sad daughter' authors
Write the articles in comparative delicate and exquisite, emotional part describe very rich, when you read this poem after poem will find the inside of the father's love his daughter, willing to let her to go around, but hope she do to explore ourselves and quite close to him not from her with my too far away. This part is very similar to certain parts of the life in my life and my mother is very love me because she didn't want me something and change myself for example makeup or doing some not suitable for their own things the same she also didn't want me too far away from her mother, our feelings between well so the distance between us is near this poem as the father in the same way
Another article, I think it is a lack of comparative not drab, because the author describes impact the feelings of the part does not have very rich, the girl wrote to the paper inside her parents but mother no reply only with her father to convey messages in your way of writing it narrative emotional part need to strengthen. In short, he will tell I choose to impact a sad daughter 'this poem