Question

帮我修改一下这篇文章英语作文(具体指点出哪里错误啊，

Recently. there is a heated discussion about whether people can play game while on duty or canot. some people maintain that people relax pressure by play game. besides playing game can raise the efficiency of work.
Qiute the contrary. The other people says,playing game should forbid while on dute.
on one hand, boss paid for employee，so employee should do better work while on dute. on the other hand, playing game effect the efficiency of work, because employee could not concentrated on work .
personally, I believe that our first task is do the best work in law time. As a good worker ,we should take advantage of time for work. what is more important that relaxing pressure can by many means, such as ,have a drink or a shortly chat .
so .now.lets we have a positive attitude,better work ,better learning .better enjoying work

Answer 1

Recently. there is a heated discussion about whether people can play games while on duty or not.(play games 要用复数，whether or not 固定搭配) some people maintain that people relax pressure by play games. besides playing games can raise the efficiency of work.
Qiute the contrary. The other people say,playing game should be forbidden while on duty.
on one hand, having been paid， employee should do better work while on duty(此处用了非谓语动词)on the other hand, playing game will affact the efficiency of work, with employee not being concentrated on work .(此处用了独立主格)
personally, I believe that our first task is to do（不定式做表语） our best to（do one's best固定搭配） work in law time. As a good worker ,we should take advantage of time for work. what is more important（主语从句） is that relaxing pressure can by many means, such as ,have a drink or a short（是形容词） chat .
so .now.let（单词原型） we have a positive attitude,better work ,better learning .better enjoying work

Answer 2

or cannot用or not
第三句跟第二句该是并列，不太顺
Qiute the contrary 是什么on the contrary
The other people says, 改say
playing game should forbid while on dute，改should be forbad, on dute改on duty
太。。。最后句
lets we have a positive attitude去lets

Answer 3

这是翻译，我相信你已经看出来了！
Recently.有热烈地讨论人们是否可以玩游戏或canot.值班,一些人认为人们放松压力,除了玩游戏玩game.能提高工作效率。　　Qiute相反。其他的人说,玩游戏时dute应该禁止。　　一方面,老板支付员工,所以员工应该做的更好的工作,而在另一方面,dute.玩游戏的工作效率影响,因为员工不能集中在工作上。　　就我而言,我相信我们的第一个任务就是做最好的工作在法律上的时间。作为一名优秀的员工,我们应该好好利用时间,谁都更为重要的是放松的压力可以由许多方式,例如,喝或不久聊天。　　所以.now.lets我们有一个积极的态度,更好的工作,更好的学习范畴内享受工作。

追问

哥，不要用谷歌翻译么，别丢人了

追答

不是谷歌好不好，不到那个不要瞎说。不过你叫我哥，我还是很开心的！！！