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Dear Mrs. Winthorp, So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so

Dear Mrs. Winthorp,

So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.

I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.

Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.

Best,

Carol

Answer 1

Dear Mrs. Winthorp,
亲爱的夫人Winthorp（温斯洛普)，

So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.
我在大学的第一周结束了！今天早上没有课，所以我想我会向您发送电子邮件，让你知道事情的进展。

I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.
我很高兴地说，事情已经制定了在宿舍的罚款。我记得问一个房间远离尽可能升降机，他们为我找一个舒适的房间在二楼。这里，有两个女孩是在我的课程，我打算和她们做朋友，这样我们可以帮助对方在课程上的工作。其他人似乎很不错，在这里很美好和温暖。

Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.
我最好现在就停止。今天下午，我要参加我的第一课。我还有一些准备要做的。保持联系。

Best,
最好的，

Carol
Carol （颂歌）

Answer 2

这不是一道改错题吗？