Question

一篇关于rule的英语作文,请帮我检查出一些语法错误

Dear Mrs Chen
I’m really unhappy because I have too many rules in my family!I can not enjoy my life. I have to get up at 6:10.I think it is too early!After that,I have to go to school promptly.I can’t do any fun thing after school.I can’t watch TV,read book or play computer games.In fact,I can’t do any thing of the entertainment.I only can do my homework and review lessons.And I have to be in the bed by 10’clock.On weekends,I have to wash clothes ,clean my room and help my parents do many things.I can’t go to a movie and go outside.And I have some boring cram lessons.I can’t stand them!I don’t have any fun.My life is so boring and busy!
Can you help me?
Tony

Answer 1

I’m really unhappy because (there are) too many rules in my family.I can not enjoy my life. I have to get up at 6:10.I think it is too early!After that,I have to go to school promptly.I cannot do any (other acivities with fun) after school (for entertainment), (for example, I cannot watch TV,read book or play computer games.I only can do my homework and review lessons.And I have to (go to bed) by 10’clock.(At) weekends,I have to wash clothes ,clean my room and help my parents do many things.I can’t go to a movie and go outside.( And there are many cram lessons in my study).I can’t stand them!I (cannot) have (my own)fun.My life is so boring and busy!
( Could ) you help me?

感觉 不要太多感叹号。。仅是个人意见 希望对你有所帮助~~

Answer 2

写得不错，不过有些地方要修改下，首先I’m really unhappy because I have too many rules in my family!这句改成there are 句式合理点，I'm really unhappy because there are too many rules in my family.

Answer 3

do anything fun. lin3 的any thing 是 anything，接下来可以说anything entertaining ，in bed是床上睡觉， in the bed 是在床边或者怎样，at 10clock 。我没耐心了

追问

by 10'clock 是在十点前

Answer 4

感觉整篇文章都在抱怨，有些消极，考场作文是不能这样写的；在意思上还有些不通畅，自己读读就读出来了。

Answer 5

么撒大问题 就句式单调点 都是i have to do.....