Question

关于英语作文！！各位英语大神请帮帮我！！！

我是一名兰州的准中考生，马上就要中考了（英语是18号）我押了一片中考英语作文，希望英语擅长的大神们能帮忙写一下，我把它背下来（我写了，但不是很出彩....）题目如下：
假如你叫xxx，兰州马上就要举办国际马拉松比赛，请你给你国外的笔友写一封信，邀请他来兰州（参加比赛）（不少于80词）
我觉得这个题目应该是围绕着兰州的风土人情来写的，可能有两种出法，一是邀请来兰州，二是邀请来兰州参加比赛，两个的侧重点应该不同。
帮帮忙啊！！很着急啊！！18号早上考，麻烦在17号就写好可以吗？？（我还要背啊！）实在没时间大神们给点写作要点还有能用的出彩的句子和词组啊，有英语老师能指点一下迷津吗？！不胜感激！！请不要有语法错误，我真的要写在中考卷子上的，写的好的加分的加分的！！

Answer 1

dear _____
my name is ____ ,do you know ?there is going to an International Marathon
i think you must interested in that ,do you want to come over to our city lanzhou gansu china?
if you go, all my family will be very happy ,have you ever came there? there is an interesting city especially..(没去过兰州，什么特别自己看着办吧大概自己发挥一点，不要全靠我。。。)
hearding about this ,do you want to come to my city ? i will wait for you in（地点任意）welcome to our city !
yours_____
x年什么的。。。
最后说一句，我是初二的，所以语法有限，你可以加入个别较难语法引起阅卷的注意，比如不但而且（not only。。but also）一...就（no sooner... than... ）等等。。。
我手打的，辛苦啊！！！！！！！！！！！！

Answer 2

Dear pen pale:
A good news came out that an International Marathon is going to be held in LanZhou in this summer. As your friend,I known you are a great Marathon runner,so I strongly recommend you to come here and take part in the competition.
The match is a world-wide one, at that time,the Marathon runner who come from all around the word will cmpete together.So pride I am! Besides, I think It is a nice chance for you to communicate your experience with others. After the match, I can show you around the LanZhou, you can also experience the trodicional architecture and local customs of the place. Isn't it a good idea?

Answer 3

的加分的加分的！！

追问

啥意思?写得好的我加分的！！

追答

Hope you respond me soon!

Answer 4

Dear John:
How is everything going?
The International Marathon is going to be held in LanZhou in this summer. Since you are a professional Marathon runner, I strongly recommend you to come here and take part in the competition,The match is a world-wide one, and at that time, most of the top Marathon runners will come to compete, and I think it will be a nice chance for you to communicate some of the experience with each other, which will definitely help you a lot in your career. Besides, after the match, I can show you around LanZhou, my hometown, and you can also experience the trodicional architecture and local customs of the place. Isn't it a good idea?
Hope you respond me soon!
Yours truely
Peter