Question

求一篇关于online shopping的英文作文。要点1越来越多的人喜欢网上购物。要点2也会带来些问题，要点三，我

Answer 1

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computer , shopping online has become a commonplace in our life . Chinese people are buying things online and the shipping companies are busy to no end. Online shopping is very convenient. All you have to do is sit at home and wait for your package to come instead of hovering outside in the cold wind. We can buy almost everything without going out.
However, enjoyment of retail shopping lost. Many people enjoy shopping with others and it is often a good way to make social connections. When shopping online, the enjoyment is lost. Besides, you may lose your private information during online shopping. Although having access to a very large number of products is highly desirable, consumers have limited cognitive resources and may simply be unable to process the potentially vast amounts of information about these alternatives
It seems that the online business contains many commercial opportunities . Many people want to seek their fortune on it. However , I think this kind of business now is close to saturation . There are thousands of shops online, it’s a problem how to make your shop outstanding and attractive among the “shop sea"

追问

自己的观点感觉不太明确

追答

根据个人想法，稍加修改就好了

Answer 2

Nowadays with the ever rapid development and increasingpopularity of the information technology ， shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.

Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example ， shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store， so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on theiracademic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries .On the other hand ， lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What’ s more the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage.

In my opinion， shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.

Answer 3

哥，你这篇作文竟然是今年的四级作文，我晕啊
去网上搜搜吧，现在多得不得了

追问

那对你有帮助吗，要不重要我就没必要在这提问了。呵呵

追答

没有帮助啊，我是考完了才看到的，郁闷呀