Question

求英语高手翻译

将下面这段译成英文，我用金山翻译的不太好，
黄金历来为我国人民喜爱，用其制成的饰品在我国的饰品行业中占有重要地位。随着我国社会的发展,人民生活水平的不断提高,消费观念的不断更新,国内黄金市场自上世纪后期至今,正以迅猛的速度发展着。黄金饰品这一历史上一直推崇的奢侈品正在快速的进入千家万户。并且中国人民向来有储备黄金的习惯,可见黄金市场发展空间广阔。在我国正式成为世贸组织成员后，国内珠宝业这个新兴的行业正慢慢与国际珠宝业接轨,整个珠宝市场也赋予了我们很大的商机。
而国家对外开放的步伐加快，使西方文化源源不断地深入到中国的方方面面，黄金饰品的设计也越来越多的加入了西方元素。大多数人在结婚时买钻石的同时也会买些黄金饰品。鉴于此，本论文依靠实习期间的经验，通过查阅相关文献资料，运用所学知识，分析研究当前我国黄金饰品市场。
以下为金山译文。
Gold has always been my favorite people. Jewelry made with its jewelry industry in China plays an important role. With the development of our society, continuous improvement of living standards, consumption of constant renewal of ideas, Since the domestic gold market since the late last century, is developing at a rapid pace。Gold jewelry has always respected the history of luxury is fast in every household。And gold reserves of the Chinese people has always been the habit ，Shows that the gold market is vast。In China officially became a WTO member，The domestic jewelry industry, this industry is slowly emerging with the international jewelry industry standards，The jewelry market has given us a great opportunity。
The accelerated pace of opening up national，So deep into an endless stream of Western culture in all aspects of China，Gold jewelry design more and more elements to join the Western。Most people buy diamonds in the marriage but also to buy some gold jewelry。 In view of this, this paper rely on the experience during the internship period, through access to relevant literature，analysis of current gold jewelry market in China。

Answer 1

Gold for our country people's favorite, and has made with the act the role of article in our jewelry industry occupies an important position. Along with the development of our society, people's living standards rise ceaselessly, the consumption ideas constantly updated, domestic gold market since the late s, are now in the speed of the rapid development. Gold jewelry this history of luxury goods have been praised highly is quick to thousands. And the Chinese people has a habit of gold reserves, obviously, the gold market has a promising future. In China officially became a member of wto, domestic jewelry industry this emerging industry is slowly and the international community, the jewelry industry jewelry market also gives us a lot of business opportunities.
But the national foreign open pace, the western culture flowing into the every aspects of China, gold jewelry design is also more and more joined western elements. Most people at the time of marriage, buy diamonds can also buy some gold jewelry. In view of this, this paper rely on practice experience during through the literature review material, through knowledge, analyzes and studies the current gold jewellery market in our country.
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Answer 2

Gold for our country people's favorite, and has made with the act the role of article in our jewelry industry occupies an important position. Along with the development of our society, people's living standards rise ceaselessly, the consumption ideas constantly updated, domestic gold market since the late s, are now in the speed of the rapid development. Gold jewelry this history of luxury goods have been praised highly is quick to thousands. And the Chinese people has a habit of gold reserves, obviously, the gold market has a promising future. In China officially became a member of wto, domestic jewelry industry this emerging industry is slowly and the international community, the jewelry industry jewelry market also gives us a lot of business opportunities.
But the national foreign open pace, the western culture flowing into the every aspects of China, gold jewelry design is also more and more joined western elements. Most people at the time of marriage, buy diamonds can also buy some gold jewelry. In view of this, this paper rely on practice experience during through the literature review material, through knowledge, analyzes and studies the current gold jewellery market in our country.

Answer 3

Gold has always been my favorite people with their jewelry made in China's jewelry industry occupies an important position. With the development of our society, people's living standard rising, consumer attitudes, constantly updated, since the domestic gold market since the late last century, is developing at a rapid pace. Gold jewelry has always respected the history of luxury is fast in every household. And gold reserves of the Chinese people has always had the habit, we can see the gold market is vast. In China officially became a WTO member, the country's jewelry industry that is slowly emerging industry standards with the international jewelry industry, the jewelry market has given us a great opportunity.
The accelerated pace of opening up state, so deep into an endless stream of Western culture in all aspects of China, gold jewelry design is also more and more joined the Western elements. Most people buy diamonds in the marriage but also to buy some gold jewelry. In view of this, this paper rely on the experience during the internship period, through access to relevant literature, to apply the knowledge, analysis of China's current gold jewelry market.

Answer 4

Will this translated into English, I use the translation of golden hill is not so good,

Gold for our country people's favorite, and has made with the act the role of article in our jewelry industry occupies an important position. Along with the development of our society, people's living standards rise ceaselessly, the consumption ideas constantly updated, domestic gold market since the late s, are now in the speed of the rapid development. Gold jewelry this history of luxury goods have been praised highly is quick to thousands. And the Chinese people has a habit of gold reserves, obviously, the gold market has a promising future. In China officially became a member of wto, domestic jewelry industry this emerging industry is slowly and the international community, the jewelry industry jewelry market also gives us a lot of business opportunities.

But the national foreign open pace, the western culture flowing into the every aspects of China, gold jewelry design is also more and more joined western elements. Most people at the time of marriage, buy diamonds can also buy some gold jewelry. In view of this, this paper rely on practice experience during through the literature review material, through knowledge, analyzes and studies the current gold jewellery market in our country.