Question

初二英语作文

如果你是Jim，这个学期你和Tom成了同桌。你发现他有时上课说话，有时在课上吃东西、听MP3，经常不能按时完成作业。请你给Tom写封信，建议他遵守班级纪律。

Answer 1

Dear Tom
I am very sorry to tell you that you broke some of our class rules. I find you sometimes talk in class. Sometimes you eat in class or listen to MP3. You often can't finish doing your homework on time. Being your deskmate, I worry about you a lot. We should follow our class rules. It's not only good to our class but also good for us. So you'd better obey our class rules.
Yours
Jim

祝你学习进步，更上一层楼，快乐每一天！(*^__^*)

追问

非常感谢您的写作，不过需要在每个时间后加原因。比如：在课上吃东西和听MP3不利于你的健康、学习。

追答

那就去掉一些内容好了

追问

不是多了..是少建议..

追答

按照你的中文写的呀

追问

需要加点建议

追答

My advice is that you should pay attention to your manners and do something good for our class. You should listen to the teacher carefully and concentrate on your lessons. You'd better finish your homework on time. When you have any problems in your homework, ask the teacher for help. So follow our class rules, you will be a good student.

Answer 2

Tom:
I'm Jim,I'm very gald as your partner in this team,But,sometimes I found you do some shouldn't things in the class.as:say,eat food listen to MP3, usually can't finished homework on time.I want to give you some advice,hope you can accept it.I think you should respect the class rules.
last hpoe you can have process every day.
Yours
Jim