Question

关于 青少年犯罪成为社会焦点 的英语作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Who Should Be Responsible For Children's Crimes? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.青少年犯罪成为社会焦点
2..........（不给全）
3.你的观点和理由

谁能帮我写篇120字以上的英语作文？
第2点比方说可以写老师父母的责任 谢谢

Answer 1

In today's society, juvenile crime has become the focus of the society, is what causes, teachers and parents who should take responsibility for this?
My point is now social pressure is so great, most of the parents are busy making money, they have no spare time to go to the children, to education to children, this let children in the process of growing up lost many of the parents and the exchange and accept education quality of opportunity.
In addition, in the classroom, teachers are mostly are in this lecture knowledge, but very few of the students thought quality education to carry on the system the education and guidance, this let hasn't fully set up of the character of the teenagers in character in the process of shape on the crooked road even struggle.
So, through these cases, I think, teachers and parents on a children's growth process should be true guiding education function, guide them to the way of the resolution, and create the bright future of his life

Answer 2

About Juvenile Delinquency
One of the much-talked-about present-day social problems is juvenile delinquency, and its rate of frequency is seemingly on the rise.
It is reported in newspapers that the delinquents range in age from 12 to 18. Only a small portion have committed serious crimes like kidnapping and murdering. Those cases are handled through the court system. Most of the delinquencies fall into four categories: brawling, including gang fighting with deadly weapons; theft, mostly petty, sexually promiscuous behaviour and addiction to drugs. The delinquents are generally placed under temporary supervision by neighbourhood committees, work units or reform schools.
The causes of juvenile delinquency are varied. Through media we often come across the following cases.
Ill-treatment to teenagers by their step-fathers or stepmothers often lead to family tragedies. School pupil delinquents, being not properly cared for, have chronic behaviour problems. Their parents are too busy either with business or with gambling. Still, there are cases resulted from parents' or grandparents' indulgence to their darlings. Petty theft once or twice is not pumshed but encouraged. Gradually these petty hleves grow addicted to steahng. Adolescents tried drugs mostly out of curiosity before they finally became habitual drug-takers.
Not a few examples can be found around us in our daily life. Limited by time and space, I have to skip them over.However, juvenile delinquency, being a serious social problem concerning the young generation, certainly deserves special attentlon. I think of all the things We can do, the most fundamental one is deep~rang and strengthening education so as to ultimately save the young.

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有自己写的么，不要四级的答案