Question

在线等翻译 高分！！！！！不要网上翻译的，自己翻译得，有道和谷歌、百度翻译的不行！

随着房地产行业竞争激烈程度的不断加剧，房地产企业急需加强自身管理，通过促进员工的工作绩效，从而改善企业的整体绩效。本文运用绩效管理的相关理论，采用定量和定性相结合的研究方法对内蒙古日信华元房地产公司绩效考核体系进行了较为系统的研究。首先从内蒙古日信华元房地产公司绩效考核现状入手；其次，针对该公司的绩效考核现状，指出公司目前在绩效考评目标、标准、方法以及反馈等方面所存在的问题；最后根据现阶段绩效考核体系中存在的问题提出针对性建议并提出改进建议。

Answer 1

With competition of the real estate industry increasing intensively,real estate companies need to strengthen their management.Through promoting employee's work performance, improve the overall performance.This paper uses performance management related theory,and uses a combination of quantitative and qualitative research methods on Inner Mongolia RiXinHuaYuan real estate company to study performance appraisal system systematically.First,this paper starts from the current situation of Inner Mongolia RiXinHuaYuan real estate company performance appraisal system.Then,this paper points out problems in the performance evaluation, standards, methods, and feedback for the current situation of performance appraisal.Finally,this paper makes specific recommendations for improvement suggestions for problems existed in current system of performance appraisal.
自己翻译的，花费了我不少时间，楼主要是看好的话要追加分哦。

Answer 2

Along with the real estate industry competitive level of rising real estate enterprise, need to their own management, by promoting performance of employees, so as to improve the overall performance of the enterprise. In this paper, the performance management related theory, using the quantitative and qualitative research method of combination of Inner Mongolia XinHua yuan, real estate company performance evaluation system is systematically studied. First of all, from Inner Mongolia XinHua yuan real estate company status of the performance appraisal; Secondly, according to the company's performance evaluation, and points out that the current situation in the performance evaluation target, standard, method and feedback the problems in; The performance evaluation system according to the current existing problems in corresponding proposals and put forward the improvement Suggestions.

追问

这个不行，网上翻译的老师说不行，你能帮我翻译下吗？

追答

这就是