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I went shopping with my mother yesterday .We had a lots of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stop our car in front of the shop. An hour late,we came back to the car.But that was strange that we couldn't open the door.But we asked a policeman for help.A few minute later,he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily,"How are you doing with my car?" We we surprising and went to see the number of the car.What you think happened then?We had to say sorry to a man again and again.
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I went shopping with my mother yesterday. We had a 【lot】 of 【或去掉a即改成:lots of】things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and 【stopped】脊岁our car in front of the shop. An hour 【later】, we came back to the car. But 【it】was strange that we couldn't open the door. 【So】we asked a policeman for help. A few 【minutes】缓野茄later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily, "【What】are you doing 【或保留How,把doing改成dealing】with my car?" We were 【surprised】扰察and went to see the number of the car. What 【加入do】you think happened then? We had to say sorry to 【the】man again and again.
I went shopping with my mother yesterday. We had a 【lot】 of 【或去掉a即改成:lots of】things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and 【stopped】脊岁our car in front of the shop. An hour 【later】, we came back to the car. But 【it】was strange that we couldn't open the door. 【So】we asked a policeman for help. A few 【minutes】缓野茄later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily, "【What】are you doing 【或保留How,把doing改成dealing】with my car?" We were 【surprised】扰察and went to see the number of the car. What 【加入do】you think happened then? We had to say sorry to 【the】man again and again.
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I went shopping with my mother yesterday .We had lots of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in front of the shop. An hour later,we came back to the car.But it was strange that we couldn't open the door.So we asked a policeman for help.A few minutes later,he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily,"What are you doing with my car?" We were surprised and went to see the number of the car. What do you think happened then? We had to say sorry to the man again and again.
I went shopping with my mother yesterday .We had lots of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in front of the shop. An hour later,we came back to the car.But it was strange that we couldn't open the door.So we asked a policeman for help.A few minutes later,he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily,"What are you doing with my car?" We were surprised and went to see the number of the car. What do you think happened then? We had to say sorry to the man again and again.
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