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Myschoolwasinthewestendofcity.Someofmyclassmatetakeabustoschoolbecauseitisrathernearf... My school was in the west end of city. Some of my classmate take a bus to school because it is rather near from their home.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on the foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But sometime on a fine day, I walk school . The other day a friend of mine show me a new short cut to school . The main school building has three stories but all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and nice gymnasium . Thank to these wonderful athletic facilities, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers happily.
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My school was in the west end of city. Some of my 【classmates】take a bus to school because it is rather 【far或faraway】from their home.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on 【去掉the】foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But 【sometimes】on a fine day, I walk 【加入to】school. The other day a friend of mine 【showed】me a new short cut to school. The main school building has three stories 【and】all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and 【加入a】nice gymnasium. 【Thanks】to these wonderful athletic facilities, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers 【happy】.

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in--at classmate--classmates near---far on the foot 去掉the sometime--sometimes
walk后加to show--showed but---and nice前加a thank -- thanks sports---sport
happily--happy
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My school was in the west of city. Some of my classmates take a bus to school because it is rather near from their home.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But sometimes on a fine day, I walk to school. The other day a friend of mine showed me a new short cut to school. The main school building has three stories but all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and a nice gymnasium. Thanks to these wonderful athletic facilitie, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers happy.
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