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Myschoolwasinthewestendofcity.Someofmyclassmatetakeabustoschoolbecauseitisrathernearf...
My school was in the west end of city. Some of my classmate take a bus to school because it is rather near from their home.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on the foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But sometime on a fine day, I walk school . The other day a friend of mine show me a new short cut to school . The main school building has three stories but all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and nice gymnasium . Thank to these wonderful athletic facilities, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers happily. 展开
It takes us half an hour to get to school on the foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But sometime on a fine day, I walk school . The other day a friend of mine show me a new short cut to school . The main school building has three stories but all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and nice gymnasium . Thank to these wonderful athletic facilities, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers happily. 展开
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My school was in the west end of city. Some of my 【classmates】take a bus to school because it is rather 【far或faraway】from their home.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on 【去掉the】foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But 【sometimes】on a fine day, I walk 【加入to】school. The other day a friend of mine 【showed】me a new short cut to school. The main school building has three stories 【and】all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and 【加入a】nice gymnasium. 【Thanks】to these wonderful athletic facilities, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers 【happy】.
My school was in the west end of city. Some of my 【classmates】take a bus to school because it is rather 【far或faraway】from their home.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on 【去掉the】foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But 【sometimes】on a fine day, I walk 【加入to】school. The other day a friend of mine 【showed】me a new short cut to school. The main school building has three stories 【and】all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and 【加入a】nice gymnasium. 【Thanks】to these wonderful athletic facilities, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers 【happy】.
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in--at classmate--classmates near---far on the foot 去掉the sometime--sometimes
walk后加to show--showed but---and nice前加a thank -- thanks sports---sport
happily--happy
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walk后加to show--showed but---and nice前加a thank -- thanks sports---sport
happily--happy
希望对你有所帮助，嘿嘿
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My school was in the west of city. Some of my classmates take a bus to school because it is rather near from their home.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But sometimes on a fine day, I walk to school. The other day a friend of mine showed me a new short cut to school. The main school building has three stories but all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and a nice gymnasium. Thanks to these wonderful athletic facilitie, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers happy.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on foot. I usually ride a bicycle to school. But sometimes on a fine day, I walk to school. The other day a friend of mine showed me a new short cut to school. The main school building has three stories but all the classrooms are in it. We have a very large playground and a nice gymnasium. Thanks to these wonderful athletic facilitie, the students enjoy sports very much. It makes our teachers happy.
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