Question

请各位英语高手帮我翻译下歌词~小野丽莎的《Angel's Eyes》，谢谢~

Eyes
As clear as the morning skies
A cloud gently sweeping by
Like wings from an angel's flight
Air
So sweet it scapes in sighs
As softly as wind through hair
The world through an angel's eyes
Look all around
Beauty can be found
Laughter in playgrounds
Music in the sounds
Smiles
Open, yet so shy
Like a little child
See through an angel's eyes
Older couple, hand in hand
Along the sea
Walk their golden years on sand
Barefoot and free
In the middle of the night
Under the Moon
Shining silver hair and light...
It goes so soon
Funny how time files
Keep your dreams in sight
Through an angel's eyes

我看的懂，但是我组织出来的中文翻译感觉没有美感~~~哪位英语好且语言组织能力好的同志帮我翻译成中文吧，不要直译，直译我也会，我需要的是能把中文意思的歌词写得比较优美的哦~~~谢啦~

Answer 1

我现翻的,凑合看看,期待高手

Eyes 眼神
As clear as the morning skies 如晨间的天空般清澈
A cloud gently sweeping by 云朵温柔地飘走
Like wings from an angel's flight 似天使的翅膀拂过
Air 空气
So sweet it scapes in sighs散落在甜蜜的叹息中
As softly as wind through hair像风轻抚发端
The world through an angel's eyes 从天使的眼睛
Look all around 凝望这世界
Beauty can be found 随处可见的美好
Laughter in playgrounds 操场上的微笑
Music in the sounds 沉醉音乐的侵扰
Smiles 微笑
Open, yet so shy 明朗中略带羞涩
Like a little child 像个孩童
See through an angel's eyes 以天使的眼睛
Older couple, hand in hand 看看那对老人
Along the sea 牵手漫步海边
Walk their golden years on sand随意地光着脚
Barefoot and free 在金色年华中留下足印
In the middle of the night 在午夜
Under the Moon 皎洁的月光下
Shining silver hair and light...还有迎着月光的银色发髻
It goes so soon虽然这一切
Funny how time files 如此迅速就像戏剧
Keep your dreams in sight 但是从天使的眼光看出去
Through an angel's eyes 铭记这梦的美丽

Answer 2

翻译优美的歌词是我的乐趣之一，希望我的尝试不算太赖。

Eyes 眼睛
As clear as the morning skies 清澈如晨空一样
A cloud gently sweeping by 一缕轻云掠过
Like wings from an angel's flight 如天使飞翔时的翅膀
Air 空气
So sweet it escapes in sighs 沁人心脾的芳香
As softly as wind through hair 如穿过秀发的微风
The world through an angel's eyes 这是天使眼中的景象

All around 四顾而望
Beauty can be found 美丽就在身旁
Laughter in playgrounds 游乐场上笑声荡漾
Music in the sounds 声音如音乐般流淌

Smiles 微笑
Open, yet so shy 舒展却有些羞赧
Like a little child 恰似幼小的孩童
See through an angel's eyes 看在天使的眼中

Older couple, hand in hand 年老的夫妇，手牵手
Along the sea 沿着大海
Walk their golden years on sand 赤足在沙滩上漫步
Barefoot and free 金色的年华如此自由
In the middle of the night 夜色浓时
Under the Moon 月光之下
Shining silver hair in the light... 闪亮的银丝白发
It goes so soon 过得好快
Funny how time flies 可笑时光飞转
Keep your dreams in sight 梦想一定要放在眼前

Through an angel's eyes 透过天使的双眼

Answer 3

眼睛
早晨的天空一样清楚
一片云轻轻的飞驰而过
像天使的翅膀飞行
空气
它在如此甜美蒜薹发育舒了一口气
只要风通过柔和的头发
世界通过一个天使的眼睛
四处瞧瞧
美可以找到
笑声在操场
音乐的声音,
微笑
开放,却又如此害羞
像个小孩子一样
看穿一个天使的眼睛
老夫妇,手拉手
沿海
走他们的金色年华在沙土上
赤脚和自由
在深夜
在月亮下面
闪闪发光的银色头发和浅的……
这么快就走
有趣的时间文件
保持你的梦想在眼前了
通过一个天使的眼睛

Answer 4

眼睛
As清除作为早晨天空轻轻地清扫由的A云彩从天使的飞行的Like翼Air
So甜点它在叹气的scapes软As作为风通过头发
The世界通过天使的眼睛
Look所有 可以找到Beauty 在操场的Laughter在声音的Music
Smiles
Open，如此避开
Like小孩儿
See通过天使的眼睛
Older夫妇，手拉手