Question

英语作文 my travel diary

Answer 1

Travel Diary
Thursday August lst
Today. It was suuny and hot all day. I went to the palace Museum. It is so long and wide and visited Tian`an Men Square. The Square is very large. There were many people there. I took some photos. Then I went to the Great wall is very long. In the afternoon. I went shopping in a Beijing Hutoing. There are different kind of shops. I bought a pair, of shoes. a jecket and other things. We had Beijing duck for dinner . It was deicious. I love Beijing duck. I was so tired but I felf very happy.

Saturday, May 26 Windy

　　Saturday again. How time flies! Another week has gone.

　　This afternoon, I was often absent-minded in class, for I was thinking of the film "The Sound of Music", which would be shown at 7 p.m. on the school playground. As soon as class was over, I hurried out of the classroom.

　　On the way home I saw a little child standing by the roadside crying. Obviously, he had lost his way. Forgetting all about the film, I went up to him and asked him to tell me whatever he knew about his family. It took me nearly an hour to send him home. His parents were very glad to find their lost child back and thanked me again and again.

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太多了

追答

这是两个Travel Diary
你要其中一个就不多了呀

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谢了

Answer 2

给您推荐了三篇：
My Travel Diary: Amsterdam, The Netherlands
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Situated at the mouth of the River Rhine, the Netherlands is a man-made country that owes its life to the sea.
Amsterdam was founded around 1200 as a small fishing village on marshland at the mouth of the Amstel river.
With a population of 800,000, today Amsterdam is a place where beauty and serenity 平静coexist happily with a slightly seamy side.
From the seedy（不愉快的） nightspots（ 夜总会）of the Red Light District, to the grace 恩典and elegance of the city’s 17th-century canal houses and the rich heritage of its museums, Amsterdam boasts a variety of attractions.
I would say in Amsterdam, you don’t need transportation. Though Tram is a good option when you’re really running out of time. Walking is the best way to get around in Amsterdam. So you won’t miss every little interesting spots this wonderful city has to offer. And of course, you don’t want to miss the breath-taking night ferry ride as well!
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My favourate country is Australia. Because there is a coast line called Golden coast lying on the seaside. And there are many cute animals, including coalar bears, kangroos, penguines,etc. Not only the beautiful senery attracts me most, but also the people there who are very friendly. So I will travel to Australia if I have a chance.
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The Kingdom of Belgium is my dream place. I have been interested in it since I was 12 years old. Belgium is a European country. It is in the northwest of Europe. And it call “The heart of Europe”. Belgium’s genre tradition has a very long history. The great painters from Belgium’s painting was the curiosity in the art museum all over the world. Belgium also has a lot of great writer, like Maurice Maeterlinck, the winner of the Nobel Prize for Literature. And Belgium’s music is very excellent, too. The Brussels Monet the Theatre Royal is one of the most famous theatre in Europe’ s food is famous all over the world. The Belgium Chocolate is many people’s favorite food. And Belgium has more than 350 kinds of foam beer. Belgium has a lot of featured products, like Witloof, Brussels cabbage, waffles and so on. They are really delicious! They are my dream food.
I really like Belgium, particularly Bruxelles, the capital of Belgium. It is a very beautiful and prosperous city. It is call “The capital of Europe”.
This is my favorite country. What about you?
希望能帮助到您！虽然不是我原创的，但我还是经过了加工哦！

Answer 3

As for this essay, I want the person who likes travel to read. And, I also want the person who yearns to the solitary journey to read.

I like travel very much. I often go to travel. It meets a lot of people when traveling. It can touch not only the person but also the region. Therefore, it comes to want to go even times how many.

I was traveling and all the people met had a very warm mind. It was very kind. There is a person who taught variety of land, too. I do not think meeting with two another degrees in the person. However, I do not think that I forget. Because, The reason is that there are a lot of very good memories.

Therefore, travel is not stopped. It went to not only the country but also foreign countries. The communication of the intention can have been done with the person in the country though the word did not run well. However, I thought that the handicap of the word was large. I thought it was good if the word could be understood more many times. Therefore, I think that I should study the language study more. It can meet the one different according to the land when traveling. The tourist spot is, and there is a lot of one not so either. There are a lot of very good points of the place taught to the person in local. Therefore, it is always made to speak. I have not traveled still alone. I want to go out to travel alone sometimes. How about you? Traveling with someone is also good. However, I yearn to the solitary journey very much. It is not, and yearns for the destination to free travel. I want to go out to unrestrained travel some time.

Finally, I yearn to the solitary journey. However, I do not hate tour travel. I think that there is a merit also in the tour. I think that traveling with the person who does not know also has the enjoyment. However, I like independent tour more. Which do you like?

Answer 4

to be honest , these two essays have a lot of grammar mistakes and many words were wrong spelling . And some of the ideas were expressed strangely . Hoping the person who has answered the question can improve your vocabularies and grammar in English .

thanks very much!!

lastly , i want to raise a question that what is the school that you are studying , primary or secondary school ?