Question

我写了一篇英语作文，帮我检查一下！

如何成为一个受欢迎的人？针对此话题你在你班学生中进行了一项调查，结果如下：
一部分学生认为： .保持良好的精神状态；.在各类活动中积极表现。
另一部分学生认为：.诚实，善解人意；.关心帮助他人。
请根据上面内容用英语写一篇作文，介绍调查的结果，并谈谈你的看法。
注意：100词左右。
How to be a popular person? There is a reserch about my class' students . Some students think that keep enough energy was necessary . Having a positive attitude in the activity can made you popular . Not everyone think so. they think honest, considerate and likes to help others was important to made you popular. I think lively personality can make you popular. If you have a rude manner, your friends will be less.

Answer 1

Research has been done on "How to be a popular person" in my class. Some students think that the popular person must maintain a good mental state; positive performance in various activities. But not everyone think so, other thinks that honesty, being considerate and like to help others are important criteria to make you a popular person. I think lively personality can make you popular. If you have a rude manner, you won't be having many friends.

你写的不错，要点都在文章里。我改了一点。谢谢。

Answer 2

class' students ----classmates
can made----can make
help others was ----....are 这里不需要用过去式，
important to made ----make