Question

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题目： Some groups, such as poor people and people from rural areas, think universities should make it especially easy for them to get access to university education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

文章：

Nowadays,to enter university education has become a common choice for students when they finish their high schools. When it comes to higher education, some people, especially those from poor backgrounds, argue that universities' entrances should be made particularly accessible to them. However, as a matter of fairness, some people may criticise this arguement, and I am one of those who oppose it.

Admittedly, students from poor families or rural areas are educationally inferior to those who grow up in cities. They may not have enough money to purchase books and their schools may not be able to afford expensive equipment for some scientific experiments. These justify the fact that pupils from rural areas are potentially have bigger possibilities to obtain lower marks in final exams, regardless of their learning ability.Therefore, people claim that universities should make it especially easy for students with poor backgrounds to access in consideration of their previous learning conditions.

However, as afar as I am concerned, universities application should base on certain criterias, such as openess and fairness. Pupils are supposed to be judged according with their ability and grades rather than backgrounds. Otherwise it would be unfair for students who study in urban areas. This unfair judgement, in addition, may potentially encourage some students to transfer to scholls in rural areas in their final academic year. By doing so, they are hoping to gain better oppotunities to get into the top universities with their deliberate backgrounds.

In conclusion, although some groups of people claim that universities should be made especially accessible for students from financially inferior backgrounds, it is deemed as a way to destroy the fairness of universities' application. In my point of view, I strongly support the view that students should be measured in terms of ability instead of the backgrounds.

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Answer 1

从新东方批改网可以具体批改下细节（但是要钱）我觉得可以得6.5-7分。

Answer 2

满分如果是100的话，我认为可以是92