Question

大家看看我的英语文章有没语法错误，谢谢啦！

My class is class 4 grade 6.It is a very big family.Because it has 59 students.We have a lot of subject, such as Chinese,English,math,music.In my all teacher,my favorite teacher is English techer.Because she is beautiful and teach English very good.In the class,we must listen carefully to teacher.We mustn’t talk loudly.we must keep the ground clean.
I like my class very much.

Answer 1

My class is class 4 grade 6这句主语宾语搭配，一般不这么说

.It is a very big family for its consisting of 59 students.

这句复数We have a lot of subjects

这句是词语用反了，应用In all my teachers

my favorite不用再加词语，它本身是名词，指最喜爱的某人、事物

teach English very good用法不对，动词要用副词well
如果用good，可以改成名词短语

其它地方没有错误

Answer 2

I'm in class 4 grade 6. It is a very big family because it has 59 students.We have a lot of subjects, such as Chinese,English,math and music.Among all of my teachers, my favorite is my English teacher.She is beautiful and teaches English very well. In the class,we must listen carefully to teacher.We mustn’t talk loudly.we must keep the ground clean.
I like my class very much.

追问

难道In my all teacher,my favorite teacher is English techer.Because she is beautiful and teach English very good这句不行吗？请快速回答！急用啊，马上要！！！(T^T)(T*T)(T~T)(TOT)(T0T)