Question

英语短文改错，急~~英语专家快来啊!!!!!!

Mary made a visit to china in last year.She took a lot of picture there. When she came back she decide to send away her films(胶卷) for printing one each time. In this way she would be more easy able to connect(联系) her photos with her diary, which she had kept while she was there.With her disappointment, the first film that she sent the store were lost. She was very upset(伤心的) because she would never see his pictures in Beijing, though store said sorry to her again and again.

段文改错,先谢谢了..

Answer 1

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