Question

求英语翻译高手！急！！！翻译一篇演讲。

我自己也能说一些，但觉得不精确，不地道。麻烦高手帮忙！请勿用翻译工具糊弄小女子，谢谢！
大家好，非常高兴今天能在这里和大家分享我的故事。这是我的一次惊险而又浪漫的亲身经历。更重要的事，它是有关我和我的丈夫——促使我们走到一起的经历。
那是大约10年以前，我刚从学校毕业，到单位工作的第一年。有一次单位领导组织全体员工去宜宾的西部大峡谷温泉泡温泉。我当时非常高兴，但是我不会游泳。到了那一天，我和几个要好的女同事一起。开始我们在浅水区泡。我们边泡边聊天，玩的非常开心。过了很久，她们觉得一直在浅水区泡不过瘾了，因为大部分的人都往深水区去了。所以我们当中有人提议到深水区去，大家都赞同。但这个时候我却提出了意义，我说我不会游泳，我害怕不敢去。但她们都劝我说，没事的，你不是有救生圈嘛。况且还有这么多同事一起，不会出事的，我经不住她们的劝说，就跟着一起去了。到了深水区，一向怕水的我开始紧张起来，浑身肌肉绷紧了，感觉身体已经不受自己的控制，手脚也不听使唤。越是紧张、越是害怕，这个时候我就开始在水里乱动了，还吵着要上岸去。就在这个时候，事故发生了，由于救生圈太大，我又在中间乱动，我很不幸的就从中间掉了下去。这个时候大家都慌了。几个女同事试图来拖我上岸，但是由于我比较重，她们也都没有在水里救人的经验，所以都无济于事。这个时候心里感觉好恐惧，好像已经感觉到死亡离自己好近....就在这个时候，我突然感觉一双强有力的手从后面抱住我，把我托出水面，然后一步步拖我上岸......上岸后我过了好一会才缓过劲来，当我清醒过来时，才知道是XX救了我。当时的感觉就是到鬼门关走了一遭，你们说是不是很惊险呢？
经过这次的事情，我非常感激XX。经过一段时间地接触，我们都互相爱上了对方，就这样，我们恋爱了。5年过后，我们结婚了。直到现在，我们很幸福地生活在一起。虽然我的丈夫也许不够帅气，不够富有，但是，他却是我最深爱的人，一直都会是。
谢谢各位高手！很急啊，最迟明晚就要。拜托拜托，弄好了分大大的加啊。谢了
非常感谢各位大侠的热心解答和帮助，谢谢每一位，你们都说的很好，让我好难抉择啊，尤其是： 雨夜ㄨ过客 、Jaffur1314 两位，辛苦了！！！鞠躬！！！

Answer 1

你的故事很感人，英雄救美，不必以身相许，但是这只是偶遇之后一见钟情，给爱情加了分。缘分吧。祝福你们。闲来给你翻译一下，全手工翻译的：

Ladies and gentlemen,I am very happy here today to share my story.It was one breathtaking and romantic experience. What's more important,it is some experience of my husband and I,which put us together.
It was about ten years ago,i was just graduated from university,the first year i worked.One time,our leader organized all staff went to the spa in YIBIN vest valley.I was very happy.but I could not swim.That day,I was there with some female colleagues who have good relationship with me.. At the first time,we all swam in the shallow area.We swam and talked,and we had a very good time.Sometime later,they all think it was not funny enough to stay in shallow area,because most of people had swam to the deep area.So some of us suggested that we should swim there.and we all agreed that.But now I have defferent opinion,I said I couldn't swim,I was scared and dear not swim there.But they all persuaded me everything will be OK because I had the life buoy.Moreover i had some many collegues togeather.I was gonna be fine.later i swam there with them.I was nervous when i got the the deep water,all mascles in my body were very tight,and i could not control my body .The more i was nervous ,the more i was scared,and made big movement there, and cry to get to the bank side.at the very time,one accident happened,because the life-buoy was too big for me,after i made some movement,I dropped into the water.At this time,verybody like a duck in the thunderstorm..Some female colleagues try to save me,but because i was a little heavy and they did not have experience of helping people in water before,they failed.At that time i was filled with great fear,i felt i was dying...Suddenly at that time, I felt one pair of strong arms embrace from behind,and pull me out of the water..After getting to the bank side for a while,I came back to my sense.I realized that it was XX who had saved me.I thought I had stepped to the gate of hell and then came back,do you think is was really breathtaking?
After this thing,I was really apreciated to XX,And after sometime we contact, we loved each other.Like this,we went together.5 years later,we get married.We live together happily until now.Althouth my husband maybe not handsome enough,not reach enough,but,he is my beloved,and it will last forever.

Answer 2

描述性和观点性：
一向怕水的我开始紧张起来，浑身肌肉绷紧了，感觉身体已经不受自己的控制，手脚也不听使唤。
As always being afaid of water, I started to be nervous: the muscles tensed , the body was spinning out of control, and the limbs also run wide.
越是紧张、越是害怕 the more nervous, the more frightened I felt.
这个时候心里感觉好恐惧，好像已经感觉到死亡离自己好近....This time I felt so scared that I just thought the death was coming to me.
当时的感觉就是到鬼门关走了一遭，你们说是不是很惊险呢？
the sense of that time was just like having travelled to the gate of hell. What an advanturous experience,wasn't it?

经过这次的事情，我非常感激XX。
After this, I was grateful to XX.
虽然我的丈夫也许不够帅气，不够富有，但是，他却是我最深爱的人，一直都会是。
Even if my husband is neither handsome nor rich, he definitely is the one who I have being deeply loved, and would be forever.

这个是比较正式的。不过叙事部分你得好好写写。

Answer 3

ladys and gentlemen，today I'm glad to be here toshare my story with you.This is not only a dangerous experience but also a romantic experience of my own. The most important thing is that it is an experience about my husband and I ,and how we got together.
About 10 years ago,I had just graduated from school and started to work...。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。翻译倒是不难，不好意思太长了，打字挺麻烦，建议用有道词典吧，从个人觉得还行

追问

啊，帮帮忙吧大侠，您的句子确实好哇 %>_<% 开始叙事的还好些，特别是中间描述性的和后面观点性的，俺更把握不准了.....

Answer 4

现在基本上都是用翻译工具了，我们公司好几个同事都英语专业的研究生，都在用翻译工具，现在谁一点点的翻译呀。不过，我问一下，我同事是否能帮我的忙。

追问

啊，那谢谢了。可是，据我所知，翻译工具弄的不是不准确么。也许我自己没有找到好的工具吧。但是我在网上找到的翻译工具弄出来都是不伦不类的，连我这个外行都知道是错误的呢....

追答

有道挺不错的，我们公司都在用。因为我们公司的产品是美国公司设计的。现在谁会花这么多时间来做这个呀，除非是给钱。又么是公司请的。

追问

请问是在线的还是下载啊？网上有哪里能找到的吗

追答

在百度有道在线翻译，可以下载下来。

Answer 5

你先弄一篇让给你修改啊，这样大一段谁爱翻译呢。。。