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请大家帮我看一下我写的雅思作文吧 帮我看看哪里不足 再改个分吧！谢谢大家了

题目是In the past,many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house.In many countries,nowadays,skills like these are disappearing.Why do you think this change is happening?How far is this situation ture in your country?
我的作文字数太长了。。。。可不可以发到各位邮箱里帮我看。。。麻烦大家了

Answer 1

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Answer 2

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Answer 3

很好

Answer 4

来雅思作文互批吧，让大家帮你看看。