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Asisknowntoallthatmillonsofgraduatescrowdedintothejobmarketeachyear.Butbecauseofthefi... As is known to all that millons of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because of the financial crisis, the situation of the emplayment has because very serious .Consider this, some people suggest graduates shold have a lower career expectation ,such as working in the western area of China .I in favour of this idea.Firstly ,compared with the big cities ,the competition is not as fierce there,but graduates can easy get a job .Secondly ,the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all,going to the west maybe bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west,for it is both good for our personal development and for our country at present. 展开
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1.2.(As) is known to all that millions of graduates (crowded) into the job market each year. 改为It和crowd
3.the situation of the emplayment has (because) very serious. 改成becomed
4.But because of the financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very
serious. (Consider)this. 改成Considering
5.I ( )in favor of this idea. 加上am
6.7.the competition is not as fierce there, (but)graduates can (easy) get a job. but改成so,easy改成easily
8.Secondly, the lower position may offer( graduate )more space. graduates加s
9.All in all, going to the west (maybe) bring more benefits. 改成may
10.for it is both good for (our) personal development and for our country at present. 改成your
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1. 第二行emplayment改成employment
2. 第二行because改成become
3. 第二行Consider 改成considering
4. 第四行.I in favour of 在I后面加一个am
5. 第五行fierce后面加一个as
6. 第五行easy改成easily
7. 第五行最后一个单词graduate改成graduates
8. 第六行maybe改成may
9 .第六行 Devote改成Devoting
10 .最后一行后面那个for去掉
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