Question

一篇初二水平的英语作文。希望大家找找哪有有错误告诉我订正。拜托啦。！！

题目：Is A family teacher necessary.
More and more middle school students are going to having family teacher .Some people think that it is necessary.But they are also some people don't agree.
In my opinion,I prefer the second viewpoint.First of all,students need some rest at the weekend .Than some family teachers are in the purpose of making money.Therefore,family teacher is not necessary .We can study well if we hard working.
如果还有错的地方告诉我，我订正一下啊。已经改了某些地方，但本人英语水平不好，错的地方也找不出来。

Answer 1

1.题目中，A小写为a
2第一行：.are going to have
3.第二行改为：But there are also ..
4.第二段第一句，I prefer to
5.第二段第一句最后，Than 最好改为 The second, 因为前面刚写到first of all 第一点
6.最后一句， 改成 if we work hard