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We should learn to look after ourselves.This is very important.Our parents bcome elder and elder that they can't take good care of us.Whenever this time,we must learn to look after ourselver. I learn something important from it such as how to love ourselves,how to cook food,how to clean the room and how to be responsible for others. I will grow from it.

这是我自己写了，水平很烂，帮我看下有没有语法错误。 或者有好的句子可以改下。谢谢了

Answer 1

一二句混合一下 It is important for us to learn how to look after ourselves.
.Our parents bcome elder and elder :have become
we must learn to look after ourselver :We want to learn to take good care of yourself more
I learn something important from it :From which I learned more important things.
such as how to love ourselves,how to cook food,how to clean the room and how to be responsible for others. :这个另起一句 how to be responsible for others改为How to responsible for others.
最后一句改为From this I will slowly growing among能好一些
文章的时态弄不太清

Answer 2

We should learn to look after ourselves. ( It ) is very important.Our parents ( become ) elder and elder ( so ) that they can't take a good care of us.Whenever ( it is ),we must learn to look after ( ourselves ). I learn something important from it such as how to love ourselves,how to cook ( ), how to clean ( ) room and how to be responsible ( to ) others . I will grow from it.

括号内为改正后的.

Answer 3

Our parents bcome elder and elder that they can't take good care of us.不对。应为：
Our parents are becoming older and older so they can't take good care of us.
Whenever this time→In this time