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题目：Advertisingisawasteoftimeandmoneybecausecustomersalreadyknowwhat'stheywant.Nowdays...
题目：Advertising is a waste of time and money because customers already know what's they want.
Nowdays,no one will deny that shopping has become a indispensible and improtant part of our daily life.We buy almost everything in markets and halls such as food,vegetables,clothes and furnitures that we need to ues everyday.Some questions came across my mind.Why customers choose this product directly?Why some merchandises are welcomed among coustomers?What influence customers most when they are purchasing things?There is no any doubt that the answer is advertising
that makes some signigicant effets on shoppers.
Some people hold the opinion that they already know what's they want,and therefore it's waste of time and money on watching advertising.Contrary to the ideas of some people is my opinion that I think it is worth knowing the information of advertising.We customers may have difficulty in choosing goods due to variety of choices in supermarket when we buy things.There is no better way to know each and every aspect of the products in the easiest than to get information about merchandises from advertising.To further clarify my demonstration,I would like to quote a example of my mother.We needed a new refrigerator when we moved to the new house.In the beginning,my mother confronted a confused problem that she did not know which
brand of refrigerator we should purchase.Then she get information from advertisments by searching the Internet and reading newspapers.This leads a ideal result,she made a decision decisively.So to speak,my mother could not have brought a refrigerator as soon as possible without the help of advertising.
Additionally,customers have a tendency to buy things that they are familiar with.It is
known a fact that the more advertisements that people have been watched,the more products will be bought.Currently,neither of any methods can get a better understanding of products except
advertisments.Not only advertising provide us myriads of information,but it also help us make decisions more quickly with less energy.With the information of advertisments,we can exactly know what we really want and where we can buy the things near us.
In a nutshell,advertising is not a waste of time and money for customers,is a way of
helping customers.They do help a customers to know,choose,compare and purchase.What's more,advertising have opened a new age of globalization and consequently we can buy products made in foreign country. 展开
Nowdays,no one will deny that shopping has become a indispensible and improtant part of our daily life.We buy almost everything in markets and halls such as food,vegetables,clothes and furnitures that we need to ues everyday.Some questions came across my mind.Why customers choose this product directly?Why some merchandises are welcomed among coustomers?What influence customers most when they are purchasing things?There is no any doubt that the answer is advertising
that makes some signigicant effets on shoppers.
Some people hold the opinion that they already know what's they want,and therefore it's waste of time and money on watching advertising.Contrary to the ideas of some people is my opinion that I think it is worth knowing the information of advertising.We customers may have difficulty in choosing goods due to variety of choices in supermarket when we buy things.There is no better way to know each and every aspect of the products in the easiest than to get information about merchandises from advertising.To further clarify my demonstration,I would like to quote a example of my mother.We needed a new refrigerator when we moved to the new house.In the beginning,my mother confronted a confused problem that she did not know which
brand of refrigerator we should purchase.Then she get information from advertisments by searching the Internet and reading newspapers.This leads a ideal result,she made a decision decisively.So to speak,my mother could not have brought a refrigerator as soon as possible without the help of advertising.
Additionally,customers have a tendency to buy things that they are familiar with.It is
known a fact that the more advertisements that people have been watched,the more products will be bought.Currently,neither of any methods can get a better understanding of products except
advertisments.Not only advertising provide us myriads of information,but it also help us make decisions more quickly with less energy.With the information of advertisments,we can exactly know what we really want and where we can buy the things near us.
In a nutshell,advertising is not a waste of time and money for customers,is a way of
helping customers.They do help a customers to know,choose,compare and purchase.What's more,advertising have opened a new age of globalization and consequently we can buy products made in foreign country. 展开
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signigicant 拼写错误
the ideas of some people,information about merchandises from advertising,clarify...demonstration,confused...problem ,neither of any methods都是中式英语在英语本族语中很少使用
把 a ideal 改成 an ideal
a example 改成 an example
建议你到新东方批改网上改改，都是外教改的，页面很精美
自己写了一篇自我感觉良好的，拿上来粗批一下改的满目疮痕啊。。。。
还好帮我指出了问题！最好托福考的时候作文写得很爽
the ideas of some people,information about merchandises from advertising,clarify...demonstration,confused...problem ,neither of any methods都是中式英语在英语本族语中很少使用
把 a ideal 改成 an ideal
a example 改成 an example
建议你到新东方批改网上改改，都是外教改的，页面很精美
自己写了一篇自我感觉良好的，拿上来粗批一下改的满目疮痕啊。。。。
还好帮我指出了问题！最好托福考的时候作文写得很爽
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我改过。。。费用太高了吧。。。总不能每篇都拿那去改吧~
还是THX~
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