Question

英语改错题大家帮帮忙？

Dear Christ
I'm a newcomer of a small town, I would
describe myself as shy and quietly ,before my classmate,
It seems always difficult for me to do things as good as they do.
I'm sure they will laugh me and see me as a Fool .
So I feel unhappy every day .
Besides,I have few friends.I don't know that they
don't like to talk with me .sometime ,we talked to each other
very well in class,but after class we become stranger at
once.I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn't
seem to work .Can you tell me about what I should do?

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Answer 1

Dear Christ
I'm a newcomer of a small town, I would (of-from)
describe myself as shy and quietly ,before my classmate, (quietly-quiet)
It seems always difficult for me to do things as good as they do. (good-well)
I'm sure they will laugh me and see me as a Fool .(laugh-laugh at)
So I feel unhappy every day .
Besides,I have few friends.I don't know that they (that-why)
don't like to talk with me .sometime ,we talked to each other (talked-talk)
very well in class,but after class we become stranger at (stranger-strangers)
once.I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn't (since-but)
seem to work .Can you tell me about what I should do? (about去掉)
剩下的一行是正确的