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英语翻译，不要机器，翻译好的追加

亲爱的签证官，您好，
首先感谢您在百忙之中抽空阅读我的邮件。
本人在上个月14号向贵大使馆驻深圳英国签证中心递交了我，我丈夫，我女儿，我母亲，我弟弟一共五人的赴英申请材料。在我递交材料时我从签证中心工作人员处得知大概在半个月左右就可以得到申请结果，但是现在已经八月了我却迟迟没有等到结果，请问是不是因为暑假人比较多而受理速度比较慢。
本人及本人的女儿对贵国都有着极大的兴趣，特别是贵国独特的文化氛围及优美风景，对于签证的结果本人非常在乎，不知贵大使馆能否先把我一家人的签证先受理出证，以平复本人对崇敬而紧张的心情。
非常感谢

Answer 1

Dear Officer,
How are you!
Thanks a lot for reading my e-mail.
On 14th last month, I had handed over the applications of my husband, daughter, mother, younger-brother and mine to Visa Center of your embassy for visiting UK. I learned from the officer that we would be aware of the feedback in half a month. Now August has come, but I haven't got any outcome. I wonder whether the work goes slowly because of too many applications in summer vacation. My daughter and I have great interests in your country,especially for your uniqe culture and nice sights. We concerned a lot on these visas, we'd really appreciate it if you can handle our case in priority to calm down our mood, which had been in respect and tensity.
Many thanks and look forward to hearing from you!
看看能否用的上咯

Answer 2

Dear Visa Officer,
Greetings!
I applied visa application together with my husband, my daughter, my mother as well as my brocher(在每个人后面用括号标注名字和护照号）in July 14 through Shenzhen Visa Application Centre. I was informed the process period shall be about half a month when applying. But it is August now and we still haven't received the result yet. I'm just wondering is that because it is the peak time that there're too many applications currently?
We have great interested in the UK, especially its special culture as well as beautiful sights. We do care about the result and I do appreciate if you could help to process our applications at your earliest convenience.
Thanks for your reading!
Yours sincerely,
XXX

有些中文的表达在英文里不能那么说或者不恰当，稍微给你改了改。另外，现在这个高峰期，你们家人的签证刚刚审理了不到半个月（只算工作日）也算是比较正常的，其实。

Answer 3

Dear visa official,
Hello.Firstly,thank you for reading my email in your busy time.
I handed all five applications of my mother,my husband,my brother,my daughter and myself for going to Britain over UK visa center in shenzhen on the 14th of last month.When I was sending materials,I was informed that I could get the result of the applications about in a half a month.While up to now, I still have not received the consequence.I would like to know whether so many people in summer holiday makes the speed lower.My daughter and I are both in great interest in Britain,especially the distinct cultural atmosphere and beautiful scenery.I care about the result of the visa very much,so whether you can handle our visa applications firstly so that I will grateful.
Thank you a lot.
部分地方做意译处理 希望对你有帮助 谢谢

Answer 4

Dear Consular Officer,
First of all,thank you to check out my mail during your busy time.I submitted five British application material to your embassy in Shenzhen Britain visa center 14th last month ,which include me my husband my daugher my mother and my brother.I was told that i will get the result half month later,when i submitted the material.But it's August now,i still fail to get the result, I am wondering that it is the summer holiday too many people submit the application material, so the process to be slowed down.
Myself and my daugher are interested in your country extremely.especially your country's unique culture and beatiful scenery.I am care about the result of visa very much,i hope dear embassy can accept our visa first,so that i can relax my emotion.
I will appreciate it in advance.

Answer 5

The dear visa officers, you are good, in spite of being very busy
first thanks you to find time to read my mail.
myself have submitted me in previous month 14 to the expensive embassy in Shenzhen Britain visa center, my husband, my daughter, my mother, my younger brother altogether five people goes to the British application material. When I submit the material I may obtain the application result probably from visa main task personnel place knowing about a half month, but already eight month I actually slowly had not waited till the result now, ask that is are quite many because of the summer vacation person accepts the speed to be quite slow.
myself and myself daughter has the enormous interest to your country, specially your country unique culture atmosphere and the exquisite scenery, myself care about regarding the visa result, did not know whether the expensive embassy does accept first first my whole family's visa shows an ID, returns to normal myself to respect, but tense mood.

追问

you are good???

追答

什么意思