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初一英语作文：

假设你在度假。给你的朋友写明信片，告诉他：你在哪、你买了什么、天气怎样、旅行怎样、你做了些什么。 跪求啊。。。。。。

Answer 1

Dear 对方名字，
Now I am visiting Beijing to spend my holiday.Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history.I visited many famous places of interest in Beijing,such as the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace.The Great Wall gave me a deep impression on this trip.It is looked like a huge dragon and I am deeply attracted by the Great Wall.The weather is fine here.There are many beautifu sights everywhere,so I took many photos there and bought some special products for my parents. I will come back soon and I will tell you more about my stories of my trip.
我现在正在北京度假期，北京是一个美丽而历史悠久的城市。我们参观了很多北京的名胜古迹，像是长城，紫禁城和颐和园。长城在这次旅途中给我留下了很深的印象。它看起来像是一条巨龙，我被它深深地吸引住了。这里的天气很好，这里有很多美丽的风景，所以我在那里拍了很多照片并且给我父母买了特产。我快回来了，我会给你讲更多我在旅途中的故事。
PS：自己写的，有问题可找我。

追问

能不能在写一篇同样题目的。要不一样

追答

I am having a good holiday in HuBei .I went shoppong in a big city and visited places of interest in HuBei.I not only enjoyed the delicious food in WuHan,but also knew about the local cultures.I followed the guide to visit a peaceful village.I walked on a country road and breathed the fresh air there.This was the first time I realized that Nature is so beautiful.The weather is fine here.I also bought a special local product for you.Please remember to pick me up at the airport next week and i will come back soon.
我正在湖北假期。我到大城市购物并且游览湖北名胜。我不仅在武汉享受了美食，还了解了当地的文化。我跟随导游来到一个宁静的村庄参观。我走在乡间小路上，呼吸着新鲜空气。这是我第一次发现大自然如此美丽。这里的天气很好，我还给你买了了当地特产。请记着下周去机场接我。我很快就回来了。
PS：看在我这么努力写的份上，加点分吧！