Question

帮忙看一下一段英文有没有语病

To hear your voice again was so fine that I felt excited than ever before. From now on,I won't just walk my way if I meet you.
谢谢，有的话指出并帮忙改一下。有另加分

Answer 1

To hear your voice again was so fine that I felt MORE excited than ever before. From now on,I won't just walk my way OR PRETEND THAT I DIDN'T SEE YOU if I meet you.

Answer 2

to hear改成hearing，去掉ever

追问

第一个没意见，但than ever before 是固定搭配啊？

追答

than before也是固定搭配啊，表示“和以前相比”更合适！

Answer 3

Hearing your voice again is such a nice thing to me that I have never felt as touched. From now on, till forever, I will never ever walk my way because I just cannot pretend that I did not see you.