Question

我的偶像Justin Bieber

一篇作文，请哪位英语好的朋友帮一下忙，不要翻译机的，要语法正确，语句通顺。谢谢。

Answer 1

My idol Justin Bieber
Everyone has an idol.They worship them crazily.Of course ,I have my own idol!
In 2009,I make an idol of Justin Bieber who is a singer and cames from Canada.With blond
hair and brown eyes,he smiles happily likes sunshine!But these aren't
the most important which makes me fall in love with him .It is his songs that makes me crazy!His voice sounds beautiful!He is a superstar in the world!
Justin bieber‘s family is not wealthy when he was a child .So he help his mother earn money as a child .And he understands parents' hard.I think that 's what I should learn from him!
That is my idol Justin Bieber!
我也是一个Belieber，呵呵，，你看看肿么样?大概是100字...... 可是我自己动手写滴吖> <.....辛苦了好久.........楼主你看着办吧,,,,,,,嘿嘿

Answer 2

在网上找一篇写帅哥的，把he 或者名字改成justin 或者bieber就行了···
我呢个时候就是这样写的····
英语作文很好找的····

Answer 3

My idol Justin Bieber
My favorite actor is Justin Bieber(告诉别人你的偶像是谁）.
He is a young boy. He is 17 years old this year. His birthday is March 1st 1994. He has blonde short hair, he has beautiful eyes,a beautiful nose,beautiful ears and a beautiful mouth(这些形容词可以换你喜欢的,我就喜欢用这个）.He likes wear T-shirts, janes and high shoes, so he looks very handsome.
He sings very good, he have many fans over the world. He likes basketball, soccer and baseball very much, and he can play them well. He can also plays guitar, drums and piano.He likes B-box best(介绍他的喜好和特长)He is very healthy ,he never smokes or drink more winem.
He sayed he is his mama's boy, he loves his mother very much. He also has a sister Jasmine and a brother Jaxon, they are all little. Justin likes his sister best, he always plays with her.(介绍家庭）
Justin Bieber is really a good boy, I will love him forever.
够长了吧（要是我我就会写这么长，就是考试也是）～～可以稍作删减或添加...顺便说一下其实可以写一些缺点，这样反倒可以突显JB的真实和可爱。还有尽量说明你对咱b宝的热爱。 希望LZ采用啊，，

Answer 4

Justin Bieber大爱大爱~

Answer 5

my idol - Justin Bieber

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谢谢，但是我要的是一篇作文。字数在100词左右。