Question

求一篇英语作文。《My Dream of High School》

“我的高中梦想”，可联系做人、学习、生活、纪律方面谈]
语法要准确无误，字数150个单词左右。谢谢合作！

Answer 1

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My dream senior high school life is much more meaningful than my secondary school life． I hope to get more knowledge and higher marks in the senior high school．

However， as an old saying goes， ‘All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．’ I also wish to have more interesting activities during my life of senior high school．

I have many good teachers who are responsible and knowledgeable as well as plenty of friends that are helpful and warm－hearted now in my secondary school．

英文写作的注意事项：

一、选择日常词汇：英语中有很多丰富多彩的词汇，但是我们只能选择一小部分的写作可以，这样不仅可以保证正确的语法也可以保证单词的正确，因为一些不常见的单词，我们可能不是很熟悉。

二、避免错误使用：因为有些词可能使用不当，让它们失去原有的功能，可能会让读者误解你的意思，或对你的观点提出疑问。

三、选对词：英语中有很多同义词，虽然意思相同，但用法却完全不同，这就导致文章在别人眼里觉得很陌生，所以在写作中一定要多使用汉语单词。

四、尽量使用包容性的词语：你使用的词语应该是公正的。选择恰当而不老套的词。

Answer 2

My dream senior high school life is much more meaningful than my secondary school life. I hope to get more knowledge and higher marks in the senior high school. However, as an old saying goes, ‘All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.’ I also wish to have more interesting activities during my life of senior high school. I have many good teachers who are responsible and knowledgeable as well as plenty of friends that are helpful and warm-hearted now in my secondary school. Thus I expect to have similar teachers and friends after entering the senior high school so that my life will be better. How I wish I could make my dream life of senior high school come true!

楼主觉得怎么样？写的不好，请包涵~

Answer 3

My dream life of senior hign school
By the time I become a senior high school student, I will be more mature and more caring for our society. I want to join a lot of clubs and try out for the student council. I like to get involved in the school because I can make a lot of friends in those clubs. As being a good student since the elementary school, I hope to keep up with my good marks. I want to be the number one student in the school, so I have to study very hard. I will try my best to do every single work assigned by the teacher, and never ask anybody to do my homework for me. I will never go on Baidu like this asking somebody to write a paragraph for me.

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您写的可能跟您符合，我觉得这篇作文不太适合我，您可以泛泛而谈，不要说什么大话，我害怕到时候我做不到，那可就太丢人了。麻烦您，可以再写一篇吗？

Answer 4

As we know ,the high school is very important

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我想问：您这是作文吗？