Question

求高一英语短文改错高手

每篇10处错误，一共2篇，就是20处错误
第一篇：
It is almost five years since I begin to learn English.I'm glad to say I'm getting along good with it.But first I came across a lot of difficulties.I couldn't pronounce English words we'll,so could I remember the words I had learned.In class ,I couldn't understand that the teacher had said.I amlost lost heart when the teacher told me,"Keeping on,and you'll do we'll ,"I was great encourage.i started working hard at English .Under the help of him and my classmates ,I made some progresses .I'm very pleaseing ,and I will work harder .
第二篇：
One day I went to the market and find many beautiful bird in a few cages for sale .I heard two young men talked .One said ,"I caught eight birds as these last Sunday ,but not a single one was alive next morning ."Oh ,God!The birds are being killed .The number is reduceing year .Birds ,like animals ,are our friends .They eat a lot of pests and make our nature beautifully .So we must do something to protect it from being killed .We hope how everyone care for them .
谢谢咯

Answer 1

第一篇
1It is 改为it has been ,因为since标志用完成时
2since I begin 改为since I began，因为since后用过去时
3I'm glad to say I'm getting along good with it 时态应为过去时，所以改为I was glad to say I was getting along good with it
4I couldn't understand that the teacher had said 改为I couldn't understand what the teacher had said
5I was great encourage改为encouraged
6I made some progresses 的progress不可数，去掉es
7I'm very pleaseing 改为I was very please（please形容词）
8I'm very pleaseing 改为I was very please(时态为过去）
9I will work harder .改为I would work harder .
10 so could I remember the words I had learned.In class 改为I also couldn't remember the words I had learned.In class

第二篇：
1One day I went to the market and find many beautiful bird in a few cages for sale 改为
One day I went to the market and found many beautiful bird in a few cages for sale
2I heard two young men talked改为I heard two young men talking
3 One said ,"I caught eight birds as these last Sunday ,but not a single one was alive next morning 改为One said ,"I had caught eight birds as these last Sunday ,but not a single one was alive next morning （因为是过去的过去，所以but前一句用过去完成时）
4The number is reduceing year 改为The number is reduceing year by year（一年又一年）
5Birds ,like animals改为 Animals，like birds
6We hope how everyone care for them .改为We hope that everyone care for them .
7I caught eight birds as these last Sunday 改为I caught eight birds like these last Sunday
8."Oh ,God!改为."Oh ,My God!
9They eat a lot of pests and make our nature beautifully 改为They eat a lot of pests and make our nature beautiful（短语make sth adj)
10So we must do something to protect it from being killed 改为So we must do something to protect them from being killed

Answer 2

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