Question

英语达人们帮忙改改这篇5句话作文吧！是有关虎妈的

语法错误什么的
Amy Chua,the writer of Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother,is the professor of Yale university.The book which came out in 2010 is a story about how Amy Chua taught her daughters in traditional Chinese way which caused a series of discussion about which educational way is better between China and USA.It was reported that the Chinese vision have been sold since the beginning of 2011.However,many Chinese mothers didn't agree with the author's point.The newest information is that Amy Chua 's elder daughter was taken in by Yale university and Havard university.

Answer 1

改完后应为 加了一个a the 变了一个has whose
Amy Chua,the writer of Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother,is the professor of Yale university.The book which came out in 2010 is a story about how Amy Chua taught her daughters in a traditional Chinese way which caused a series of discussion about whose educational way is better between China and the USA.It was reported that the Chinese vision has been sold since the beginning of 2011.However,many Chinese mothers didn't agree with the author's point.The newest information is that Amy Chua 's elder daughter was taken in by Yale university and Havard university.

Answer 2

主谓一致！单复数。。。。时态。。。didn't改don't。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。 the latest news ...was chosen by yale....太多了。。

Answer 3

2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试当中的阅读表达就提到了她 , 第三行的第二个which应该改为whose, 还有USA前面应该有个the ,倒数第三行的have 应该改成has,