Question

这句话有语法错误吗？

when you are laughing opening your mouth widely,it's so handsome and attracts me. 这句话有语法错误吗

Answer 1

有错误。英语中的动词不像汉语中的动词能够联用，应改为when you are laughing， open your mouth widely。前半句是状语，后半句才是主语。

Answer 2

语法错误，are laughing 不可以直接接 openning your mouth widely，需要一个连接词，by 或 with 之类的。

When you are laughing by opening your mouth widely 感觉有点奇怪。
When you are laughing with your mouth opening widely 自然很多。

ps 一楼的句子语法错，应是The way you smile，而不是The way you smiling。

Answer 3

语法错误，are laughing 不可以直接接 openning your mouth widely，需要一个连接词，by 或 with 之类的。

Answer 4

有﹐ 不会接连使用两次现在进行式的。

When you are laughing with your mouth wide open, you look so handsome and attractive to me.

Answer 5

laugh 是大笑， 用smile更委婉一点， open your mouth widely咧开你的大嘴，这样也可以叫handsome?- -！ 如果换成 The way you smiling seems handsome and attracts me so much.你觉得怎么样