Question

我的英文简历,帮我对照中文,看翻译的对不对

Resume

Individual general situation

Name: Sex: Male
Age: 23 Special field: Information Enginerring
University I graduate: NanJing University of post and communication
Educational background: bachelor Graduation time: June-06
Email: Telephone:
Working Seniority:one year
Object
Junior Java Software Engineer
Java Software development based on Oracle DB、Mysql DB
Qualifications
1.National Computer Rank Examination Band 3
2.College English Test Band 6
Speciality
1.Be expert in Java Programming based on J2EE:JSP/Servlet、JavaBean、Struts and so on.
2. Be familiar with Oracle DB:SQL、PL/SQL、JDBC and PRO*C;
3.Master Web development based on Struts+Hibernate structure;
4.Know BEA Weblogic,Apache Tomcat and some other application server well；
5.Can use several tools like eclipse、netbeans to develop programe；
6.be familiar with XML、OOA/D;
7.be familiar with TCP/IP、UDP protocals and Socket programming;
8.know EJB;
9.know C++ programming in Unix/Linux ;
Work Experience
From August-06 to Feberary-12 I worked in telecomunication company in Jiangsu Zhengjiang ,and was engaged in network Maintenance together with propagation and sale for telecommunication’s business.
Java Project Experience
1. Billing System
1) This J2EE system which use Struts、Hibernate、Spring technologis
and Oracle database is based on Sun Solaris and worked on Apache Tomcat platform.The system background is composed of data-collection-system and data-integration-syetem, the system proscenium is divided into six modules: user-self-service manage、pricing manage、user manage、admin manage、account manage、reckon manage.
2) In the part of Web,I chiefly take charge of pricing manage and
admin manage mudules. The pricing manage module is used to inquire、modify、delete and add pricing particulars. The admin manage module is used to add、modify and delete admin accounts.I use Struts+Hibernate+Spring frame to accomplish the two modules.
3) The background includes data-integration-system and
data-collection-system,which include collection module and receiption module.They can accomplish some functions as below:1. initial pricing files collected on regular time(one time per hour) can be arranged to data detailed lists,and then upload to Central Processing System.2.The receiption system- Central Processing System,intercept and collect BIDR which are data informations transmited by data-collection-system,then store data into table t_detial_X by PROC.In the process of transmit and

英文简历我帖了一部分,全帖帖不下,中英文简历完整版在这里,http://hi.baidu.com/djmaxy
今晚给分,帮我看看有没语法错误,描述有什么不妥的没,谢谢
谢谢各位了

Answer 1

恢复个人概况姓名:性别:男年龄: 23专业:信息工程中,我大学毕业: 南京大学邮政和通信教育背景:学士毕业时间: 1998年6月至06电子邮件:电话: 工作资历:一年面向初级JAVA软件工程师JAVA软件开发基于Oracle分贝¢ MySQL的分贝资格1.national计算机等级恩 氨化带3宋英语考试六级专业偏爱专家JAVA编程基于J2EE :在JSP / Servlet的JavaBean类¢ ¢段式等. 2 . 熟悉甲骨文分贝: SQL语言¢特等/ ¢的SQL JDBC和PRO*C的; 3.master Web开发基于Struts + Hibernate的结构; 4.know于BEA WebLogic , Apache的Tomcat和其他一些应用服务器和» 5.can使用一些工具如月食¢ NetBeans的发展程序» 6.be发 miliar与XML的OOA ¢ /四; 7.be熟悉TCP协议/网际¢协议的UDP协议和Socket编程; 8.know EJB的; 9.know C++编程,在UNIX / Linux的; 工作经验,从8月06至feberary -12我从事电信公司在江苏镇江,是从事网络维修 国营繁殖和出售电信¯收盘业务. Java项目经验1 . 计费系统1 )本J2EE系统所使用的Struts ¢ ¢冬眠春technologis和Oracle数据库是基于Sun Solaris和工作 在Apache Tomcat和钼制度背景,是由数据采集系统和数据集成-- 435.1 , 系统前台分为六个单元:用户自助管理¢定价管理¢使用者管理当局¢ ¢管理帐户管理¢算管理. 2 )的部分网站,我主要负责定价和管理当局的管理mudules . 定价管理模块是用来查询¢ ¢修改删除,并放入定价细节. 管理员管理模块是用来补充¢修改和删除当局accounts.i使用的Struts + Hibernate的春天+内完成两个单元. 3 )的背景,包括数据集成系统和数据采集系统,其中包括采集模块和接收module.they可以完成部分功能如下: 1 . 初步定价档案收集,定时(一次性每小时) ,可以安排数据的详细清单,然后向上传 中央处理system.2.the接收系统的中央处理系统,拦截并收集整饰中的数据信息传递的数据收集系统,然后数据存储 到表t_detial_x proc.in的过程中,传达

Answer 2

1.大体模版

Resume

(your name)
(address)
(Tel, email)

Career Objective:
Educational Background:
Work Experience:
Qualifications:
Honors & Awards:
Special Skills:
Experience:
Personal Data:

说明：
1>.注意添加或修改我标注了<>和***()等符号的地方，我都在其中加以说明了
2>.我用的是比较标准的国外简历格式，有别于国内格式，但更简明。相信投到外企足够了。

3>.计算机的专业术语我不懂，无法给你参考

2.根据你之前的简历做的修改如下

Resume

(Wang Qiang
P.O.Box 237, Beijig University
5 Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871
Tel: 62768888 Email: Wangqiang@163.com)

Career Objective: Junior Java Software Engineer,
Java Software development based on Oracle
DB、Mysql DB
Educational Background:
Sept 2002 to NanJing University of post and communication
June 2006 Majoring in Information Engineering
Main courses include English, Computer, Java,
***(and sth. else)
Work Experience:
Aug yyyy to Telecomunication company in Jiangsu Zhengjiang
Feb yyyy (公司全称)
Internship, ***(职务)
Network Maintenance
Propagation and sale for telecommunication’s
business.
Qualifications: University graduation certificate and bachelor
degree June 2006
College English Test Band 6 (mm yyyy)
National Computer Rank Examination Band 3 (mm
yyyy)
Honors & Awards: <所获奖励 如 Twice awarded scholarship by
Nanjing University of post and communication
2004 & 2005 没有可以不写这项>
Special Skills: Familiarity with ***
Experience: <在校职务。没有可不写>
Java Project Experience:***
Personal Data: Date of Birth: dd/mm/yyyy
Gender:Male
Marital Status: Unmarried

Self Assessment

3.注意事项：
1>.标题要用粗体
2>.格式要注意对齐

Answer 3

我的建议是简历即简单的经历
所以以言简意赅为主旨.
修改你的原稿供参考.
RESUME
Personal Information
Family Name XXX
Given Name XXX
Date Of Birth XXX
Birth Place XX
Sex Male
Marital Status Unmarried
Mobile XXX
E-mail XXX

Education & Work Experience
date---date
NanJing University major in Communication as bachelor degree
Date---date
Received the certificate letter of National Computer Rank Examination Band 3
Date---date
Received the certificate letter of College English Test Band 6
date---date
Joined a telecommunication company as Network Administrator
Date1---date1
… …
TECHNICAL EXPERTISE
Expert in Java Programming based on J2EE:JSP/Servlet、JavaBean、Struts and so on.
Good at Windows Server Families administration and hardware maintenance.
Good at TCP/ UDP protocol and socket programming, EJB and C++ programming based on Unix/Linux.
Be familiar with Oracle DB:SQL、PL/SQL、JDBC and PRO*C , Web development based on Struts+Hibernate structure, BEA Weblogic,Apache Tomcat and some other application server software.
Independent and be able to work and keep on studying under a dynamic environment, and Willing to share knowledge with teammates to get more achievements, so glad to find my own career path with the teachers in this company, both studious and dedication are my greatest strengths.

简化了你的专业介绍部分 因为原文中大部分重复了
有好东西可以在面试的时候再往外倒
把XXX改成自己的实际情况
祝求职顺利

Answer 4

Information Enginerring [Engineering]

看上去真的很乱,原来很多地方要改
这么给你建议：

第一部分你的
Personal Profile

第二部分上Professional Experience

第三部分上Education

最后上别的

工作经历是已时间近的列在最上面，公司名字，职务，时间段
工作内容，工作成绩

Answer 5

偶得天.太乱了.你真的是南京大学的吗.