Question

大神快来！

Answer 1

How's everything going?
你还好吗？
I'm glad to have met you and become friend with you.
我很高兴能认识你并和你成为朋友
I miss you very well and thus I'm writhing to tell you anything about my new life at collage.
我非常想念你所以我写信告诉你我崭新的大学生活
My new school is so beautiful as a huge garden.
我的新学校美丽得犹如巨大的花园
There are green grass and colorful flowers everywhere.
到处都是青色的草和许多颜色的花
My teachers are all kind and I believe, with the time go by, I'll make a great progress.
我的老师都很亲切及我相信，未来，我将获得巨大的成就
My classmates are very friendly and I made many new friends here.
我的同学都很友好以及我认识了许多新朋友
I feel that my new life is very excited, but I also realize that it is full of challages.
我的新生活让我觉得很兴奋，但我也意识到这将会有许多挑战
I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a brightly future.
我决定用功努力所以我会有光明的未来
Of course, I'll also do more exercise to keep fit.
当然，我也会多做运动来保持身材
I'm looking forward to your reply.
我期待你的回信

追答

How's everything going?
你还好吗？
I'm glad to have met you and become friend with you.
我很高兴能认识你并和你成为朋友
I miss you very well and thus I'm writhing to tell you anything about my new life at collage.
我非常想念你所以我写信告诉你我崭新的大学生活
My new school is so beautiful as a huge garden.
我的新学校美丽得犹如巨大的花园
There are green grass and colorful flowers everywhere.
到处都是青色的草及各种颜色的花
My teachers are all kind and I believe, with the time go by, I'll make a great progress.
我的老师都很亲切以及我相信，未来，我将获得巨大的成就
My classmates are very friendly and I made many new friends here.
我的同学都很友好以及我认识了许多新朋友
I feel that my new life is very excited, but I also realize that it is full of challages.
我的新生活让我觉得很兴奋，但我也意识到这将会有许多挑战
I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a brightly future.
我决定用功努力所以我将会有光明的未来
Of course, I'll also do more exercise to keep fit.
当然，我也会多做运动来保持身材
I'm looking forward to your reply.
我期待你的回信
（修改部分词）

Answer 2

第一行 friend变friends
第二行 well变much anything变something
第三行 so变as
第四行 go变going 去掉a
第五行 made前加have
第六行 excited变exciting
第七行 brightly 变bright