Question

帮忙写一篇高中英语作文

1.日记的格式
例如：
sep5. Sunday Sunny
2.XX月XX日 地点：Park 抵达方式：乘校车
出发时间 上午7：20 到达时间9：30
活动内容：上午游泳 下午用英语讲故事，拍照等等
返回时间：下午5：30

- - 暑假补课的英语测验 老师布置的题目
高三的小作文 字数不用太多 能把这些内容串起来 然后写的自然一些...
我本身英语较差 所以只能求助了
比如结尾可以写个啥what a good day之类的话...

日记形式的阿......日记日记的...

Answer 1

sep sunday sunny
It's very fine,today.so there was a outdoor activity.Firstly,we went to the park by school bus at 7:20 p.m.And at 9:30,we arrived at the destination.Secondly.we were swimming,it's so nice.Because swimming is my favorite sport.After lunch,had a good rest and we told stories by English.Finally,in park,we took photos each other.About 5:30,we still took school bus to go home.What a good day! 很久没弄了，将就点

追问

we arrived at the destination at 9：30 After lunch ，we told stories by English while having a good rest
Finally，we took photos each other in park
这样有语病吗 就是把你其中的几个句子稍作改动了

追答

木有语病

Answer 2

Just think by youself,if I do that its not useful.if you really want to improve youself,you have to do your owns

Answer 3

art exhibition
Today,It's very interesting,I with my brother went to the art exhibition.
In the art exhibition,I saw the many draw a portrait,It's very interesting,My favorite is the one painting the sky,It's very beautiful.painting is the blue bird days and there were clouds,what a wondeful ah,There many,many paintings,very beautiful.
Today is a great day,Hope that also the case

Answer 4

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