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请根据表格内的提示写一篇80-100词的短文介绍中国著名羽毛球运动员（badminton player）林丹，内容可以适当发挥。要求适当使用被动语态和连词。
姓名：林丹
出生时间：1983.10.14
出生地：福建省
训练经历：5岁开始打羽毛球 ，9岁进体校
成绩及荣誉：到目前为止，获得了13个世界冠军（champion）；2008年北京奥运会获得一枚金牌；2010年广州亚运会上获得两枚金牌；虽然年轻，但被认为是世界十佳运动员之一。

初三作文 别用太难的词 另最好带份翻译我好看谁给的好

前几天我问过这个 给的答案都不很满意 比如这个
lingdan,china's famous badminton player.is born on 1983.10.14 in fujian province.lingdan started to play badminton in 5 years old .when he is 9 years old he went into sports school.so far .lindan has got 13 world champions;he got a gold medal on beijing olympic game in 2008 and 2 gold medals in Guangzhou Asian Games , he is young,but lindan is considered to be one of the ten best athletes in the world

born之前用了IS LINDAN打成LINGDAN之类

可以用这个改 也可以重写个 注意语法！！！！！！

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Answer 1

His name is LinDan.His birth time is on October 14, 1983。
He is the birthplace of fujian province.
He from five began to play badminton, 9 years old. He loved who into sports.
So far, Lin Dan won 13 world champion; The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games won a gold medal; The 2010 guangzhou Asian games won two gold MEDALS; Although young, but he is believed to be one of the ten best athletes in the world.
He is my favorite sports star.

他的名字是LinDan。他出生的时间是1983年10月14日。
他是福建省的诞生地。
他从五开始打羽毛球,九岁。他喜欢谁上运动。
到目前为止,所获得的13个世界冠军林丹,2008年北京奥运会赢得一枚金牌,2010年广州亚运会赢得两枚金牌,虽然年轻,但他被认为是最好的运动员的十大在世界上的更大。
他是我最喜欢的体育明星。

Answer 2

lindan,who is a very famous badminton player in china .he was born in fujian province on October 14, 1983. he has started to play badminton since he was only five years old.and when he was a boy of 9, he went to sports school.in that time,he used to be trained for several hours every day.becasue of his effors,he has not only won 13 world champion but also gotten one gold medal in beijing 2008 olympic games and two gold medals in guangzhou 2010 asian games up till now.although he is young,he has already been considered to be one of the top ten althletes in the world.