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最近你校校园网上出现一个英语帖子，意在了解同学们在体育技能、艺术特长和科技创新等方面的发展情况。请你以“夏宇”这一网名针对以上三方面回帖，内容包括以下要点：1.你的特长2...
最近你校校园网上出现一个英语帖子，意在了解同学们在体育技能、艺术特长和科技创新等方面的发展情况。请你以“夏宇”这一网名针对以上三方面回帖，内容包括以下要点：
1.你的特长
2.你发展特长所面临的困难
3.你有什么希望或建议 展开
1.你的特长
2.你发展特长所面临的困难
3.你有什么希望或建议 展开
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Xia Yu, 10:10 am, June 18
I am Xiayu.I am tall and I like playing basketball. As I practise a lot, I am good at playing basketball. However, I have some difficulties in keeping practising it. First, our school only has 2 palygrounds and a lot of students play basketball after class. Second, since now I am going to senior high school, my parents and teachers hope I can spend less time playing basketball.I suggest that another playgroud should be built in our school and I hope that teachers and parents can change their attitude to that.
点评：诸如as, however, first,second这些连接词的使用增加了这篇短文的条理性，使得描写更加紧凑，上下文连贯自然；hope 和suggest后的宾语从句使用也比较正确。作者具有较好的书面表达能力。
One possible version:
I like sports and I’m good at playing basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I can’t sing well. I’m afraid of singing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.
I am Xiayu.I am tall and I like playing basketball. As I practise a lot, I am good at playing basketball. However, I have some difficulties in keeping practising it. First, our school only has 2 palygrounds and a lot of students play basketball after class. Second, since now I am going to senior high school, my parents and teachers hope I can spend less time playing basketball.I suggest that another playgroud should be built in our school and I hope that teachers and parents can change their attitude to that.
点评：诸如as, however, first,second这些连接词的使用增加了这篇短文的条理性，使得描写更加紧凑，上下文连贯自然；hope 和suggest后的宾语从句使用也比较正确。作者具有较好的书面表达能力。
One possible version:
I like sports and I’m good at playing basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I can’t sing well. I’m afraid of singing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.
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